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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Three Herons Balance, uses its seventeen syllables to capture a moment when human activity represents the majestic creatures that are the models of our greatest achievements.
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This haiku, Three Herons Balance, uses its seventeen syllables to capture a moment when human activity represents the majestic creatures that are the models of our greatest achievements.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments for my bird haiku, Bill. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Spitfire
Ha,ha. I love this one. Clever you to note the positions of this elegant bird. Super satori line. "effortless discipline" nice oxymoron.
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Ha,ha. I love this one. Clever you to note the positions of this elegant bird. Super satori line. "effortless discipline" nice oxymoron.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Shari, I truly appreciate your very kind review and generous rating for my haiku. I'm pleased you enjoyed the satori and your haha is the perfect compliment. Thank you for your wonderful response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from rama devi
Love the satori--morning yoga! Perfect word economy. Fine presentation. Good phonetics--especially all the S sounds and consonance of L. Excellent imagery. Bravo.
Love,
rd
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Love the satori--morning yoga! Perfect word economy. Fine presentation. Good phonetics--especially all the S sounds and consonance of L. Excellent imagery. Bravo.
Love,
rd
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, red. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the satori no imagery of this scene.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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Comment from tfawcus
Considerably more elegant and graceful than the average participant in morning yoga! It is a successful haiku, I think, and brings a lovely image to mind.
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Considerably more elegant and graceful than the average participant in morning yoga! It is a successful haiku, I think, and brings a lovely image to mind.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Tony. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is so very good, my friend and a great advertisement for your friend as well. Strong imagery in the first two inter-connected lines and a ah-ha surprise satori~Debbie
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This is so very good, my friend and a great advertisement for your friend as well. Strong imagery in the first two inter-connected lines and a ah-ha surprise satori~Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Debbie. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery and the satori line.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha, too cute! Poem flows well and is entertaining in the traditional haiku style. Superb choice of artwork. Great use of color. I would recommend this poem to anyone. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Haha, too cute! Poem flows well and is entertaining in the traditional haiku style. Superb choice of artwork. Great use of color. I would recommend this poem to anyone. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Kathleen. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mastery
How clever this is, Irish. Wow! and me with no sixes left. I love it. I sincerely hope you guys aren't blowing your best stuff and then when a contest comes along you have usaed everything up. LOL...Just kidding. Stellar writing, my friend. One of the best I have read. :) Bob
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How clever this is, Irish. Wow! and me with no sixes left. I love it. I sincerely hope you guys aren't blowing your best stuff and then when a contest comes along you have usaed everything up. LOL...Just kidding. Stellar writing, my friend. One of the best I have read. :) Bob
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Bob. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
