Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "haiku (three herons balance)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
47 total reviews
Comment from WriteSins!
What a nice, simple haiku, indeed. Lovely word with the lovely, vivid word choice to portray such a straightforward, but rather pretty picture. Excellent work and keep it up!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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What a nice, simple haiku, indeed. Lovely word with the lovely, vivid word choice to portray such a straightforward, but rather pretty picture. Excellent work and keep it up!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, WriteSins!. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from mermaids
This is lovely. I am fond of Great Blue Herons which are common here on Cape Cod. There is a feel of elegance in your words. The last line about a "morning yoga class" is priceless. It is a perfect use of words to create a scene.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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This is lovely. I am fond of Great Blue Herons which are common here on Cape Cod. There is a feel of elegance in your words. The last line about a "morning yoga class" is priceless. It is a perfect use of words to create a scene.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Mermaids. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the satori line.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The heron can be very elegant on their long legs, looking like they are busy doing yoga or some slow rhythmic dance all together.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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A very well-written haiku. The heron can be very elegant on their long legs, looking like they are busy doing yoga or some slow rhythmic dance all together.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Sandra. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree with you they are elegant birds.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from robyn corum
Karyn,
Why would I be surprised that I like your haiku?! *smile* This is a fun and funny poem and it made me smile BIG this morning! Thanks for brightening my day!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Karyn,
Why would I be surprised that I like your haiku?! *smile* This is a fun and funny poem and it made me smile BIG this morning! Thanks for brightening my day!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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LOL Thamks so much, Robyn! S glad the haiku made you smile...a great compliment.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Ha ha - I like this - wish I was a nimble.
a very clever use of words in this haiku and
great presentation.
Well penned, Karyn.
Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Ha ha - I like this - wish I was a nimble.
a very clever use of words in this haiku and
great presentation.
Well penned, Karyn.
Margaret
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Margaret. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is a brilliant Haiku summing up a brilliant picture/story. It is like a poem concentrated and works perfectly to convey what is intended. I am very impressed with this Haiku well done.Meia :)
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This is a brilliant Haiku summing up a brilliant picture/story. It is like a poem concentrated and works perfectly to convey what is intended. I am very impressed with this Haiku well done.Meia :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from LIJ Red
To make my review save I will claim I know little about Haiku or herons, and that it is presumptuous of me to review and rate a Haiku. Let's see, five seven five, present tense, in heron season, sound image, reflective last line...looks fine to me.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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To make my review save I will claim I know little about Haiku or herons, and that it is presumptuous of me to review and rate a Haiku. Let's see, five seven five, present tense, in heron season, sound image, reflective last line...looks fine to me.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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LOL sounds like you know more about haiku than many readers, LIJ. Thamks for your review, comments, and humor.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this again is well written I like you enjoy the challenge of this beautiful form well done again my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Yes this again is well written I like you enjoy the challenge of this beautiful form well done again my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Jill. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the artwork, presentation, and haiku.
-I also happen to like herons.
-You have good concrete imagery and nature reference.
-The satori is particularly good.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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-I like the artwork, presentation, and haiku.
-I also happen to like herons.
-You have good concrete imagery and nature reference.
-The satori is particularly good.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, Pam. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the satori line.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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You are quite welcome, Karyn, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice artwork for the poem. Good metaphor for herons balancing in the last line. I wish I could do yoga as gracefully.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Nice artwork for the poem. Good metaphor for herons balancing in the last line. I wish I could do yoga as gracefully.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my bird haiku, dragonpoet. I truly appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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No problem, Karyn
Joan
