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Reach for the Stars

a Quasi Triolet Poem

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Comment from LoannaLois
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What an original thought transferred into a poem. The rules of Quasi Triolet aren't easy yet you wrote of the writer and writing with ease.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi LoannaLois, Thanks for your review and great rating and it was fun to write this Many Cheers for your time
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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What a stunning and special write. Making some excellent points about why we write, it as a whole is an absolutely brilliant poem, pretty much perfect and I really enjoyed its fantastic flow and rich meanings, well done, Meia x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Meia, Thanks so much for reading my Quasi Triolet it was fun to create and I thought it may work for this style and am so pleased you liked it enough to rate and review much appreciated Cheersx
Comment from Dom G Robles
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I like this short essay. It guides the reader how to view things in their own perception. However, there is something I can't reconnect pretty well. The third line with the 4th line. "And if we like and think their great Review..." I think, the word "their" is out of line, although. The rhyme and rhythm, I think, is great. Can I safely say: And if we like and think they're great...

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Dom, Thanks for your review and ai am glad you picked up that line as ai should have realized when I typed their ai should have used they're So many Thanks for helping and I have changed it .Cheers
Comment from Irish Rain
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What a lovely Quasi-triolet....writing is always a good topic on here! I think you misspelled 'their' on line 3...should be 'they're'....good luck, blessings...

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Irish Rain yes I have mispelled they're all fixed now but appreciate you tip also Thanks for your review and good luck wishes we shall see LOL Cheers
Comment from Bill Schott
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This quasi triolet, Reach For the Stars, shines a light on what we are doing here I guess. Post it, read it, critique it, and repeat. In line three you may have meant"they're". Happy day.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Bill, Thanks for reading my triolet and yes it should have been they're and so it is now LOl You also have a happy day Cheers
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I agree. Keep writing. In your third line, their should be they're, because it's short for they are. Otherwise it's perfect. Love the picture. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Cindy, Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem and I have fixed the they're so thanks for picking that up Glad you liked the picture I did too Cheers for your good luck message
Comment from Rhonni
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Awesome to be able to write a poem about writing and reviewing...encouraging us readers to create our own poetry. Thanks for the inspiration!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Hi Rhonni. Thanks for your review and yes a bit if fun to create this and I am pleased you thought it inspirational Cheers
Comment from His Grayness
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This work is very well done in all ways and I cannot offer any suggestions to improve it. I enjoyed reading it and wish the author good luck in all future work with Fanstory. HIS GRAYNESS

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    Hi HIS GRAYNESS Thank you fore your encouraging words for my haiku City prompt I enjoyed reading your review much appreciated Cheers
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    Hi Your GRAYNESS please forgive my previous reply I have answered your review for the wrong poem I also have a Haiku entry in a contest and I was mixed up with that so I do appreciate you lovely review for my latest Quasi triolet "Reach for the Stars" and your words are so encouraging, I do appreciate then Cheers PS I have had so much fun and support here on FS, it is very addictive LOL
Comment from Sherman541
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Tis true when ever anyone writes the words come from within the heart, the soul and the emotions from deep within. What a beautiful way to say it - a Poem nicely done. Sarah

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    Hi Sarah, What a lovely review and I am pleased your thought to review my Haiku much appreciated Cheers
reply by Sherman541 on 10-Jan-2017
    you are welcome - I really do not understand how they are written but I really loved this one a lot and the others I have read also - The picture with this one was fantastic too :) - Sarah
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    Hi Sarah

    A Quasi Triolet has a certain syllable count of 8 per line with a rhyming scheme of a.b.a.a.a.b.a.b.
    I hope that helps
    Have a go at writing one

    Cheers