Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - very well written Quasi-Triolet in abaaabab. Lovely the way you have described the reason why we all write on Fanstory. The purpose of it all is made evident in this work. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Ho Dorothy, Thanks for stopping by for a read and for your good luck wishes I was lucky enough to be a duel winner with 2 other fine Quasi triolets and that has made my efforts worthwhile Althought the fun is in the writing these many Thanks Cheers Christine😃

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

compliments to you on the ease of smoothness in which your poem read. Very well done on this quasi-triolet! Blessings, AmyJo

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi AmyJo, Thanks so much for your review and I am pleased to have your comments Nice to meet you also Cheers

Comment from briannaellison

Exceptional

I really liked this poem - it flowed well and the rhymes didn't seem forced. The last line (Your post is really all we need) is my favorite; it's inspirational and concise. The first couple lines were somewhat confusing and seem unclear, I felt like they didn't follow the theme of the poem until I reread it, but when I reflected on it more it made sense. It made me think, which is what poetry is supposed to do!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi briannaellison. Thanks for your lovely comments and for you 6 star rating this is most appreciated. TI thought I would give this a try and use the them of writing and posting , Yes sometimes one has to reread to get the meaning I often do and it is interesting on a second read what one can find Cheers for your support and generous review Christine

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Interesting artwork and a well written Quasi-Triolet poem. We do re-create our inner thoughts, but we do need others to take the time to read them.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi MelB, Thanks for your review of my quasi triolet and I so pleased you stopped to read my inner thoughts. Many Cheers

reply by MelB on 12-Jan-2017

You're welcome.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yeah, I agree completely. You never know unless try, and you'll never begin until you start.
This was short, simply worded, but powerful and profound in its delivery and message.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi dean, Thanks for taking a look at my quasi triolet It is fun to write these to see what ones can come up with ands thanks for your best of luck for the voting Cheers +++ Christine

Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

Very nicely written. Holds to the quasi-triolet form required. I am certain many writers on FanStory will relate to the message within, though I confess the image is very confusing. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Thal1959. Thanks for your review for my quasi triolet. The image is of city lights taken from above them I assume from a planes window and when you fly over the city is reminds me of seeing stars so hence the sky turned upside down. I hope that helps it is a bit ' left field' LOL. Cheers Christine😃

reply by Thal1959 on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for the explanation of the pic - it reminds me of why I hate Picasso. lol.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

well don eon quasi-triolet about writing, posting to get the stars/reviews.Nicely done. good luck on this and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Hi William, I had a bit if fun with the styles and this is my creation and you have a nice day too William Cheers

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Quasi Triolet. We create with words for others to read and review. We sometimes make a small mistake, we did not realize ourselves at the time.

I might be wrong but I think line 3 has a typo
the're(they're) great

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Sandra, Thanks for reading this poem and I shall have a look at line three and fix it up .Always nice to have your support Cheers Sandra have a great day Christine😃

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

A good and proper triolet. You seem to have followed the
rhyme scheme of abaaabab and the subject matter is fun,
Well done, Good Luck in the contest. Nancy

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Nancy, I tried to stay true to the style and have a bit of fun also a d Thanks for stopping by to read and review this one And for your good luck wishes Cheers Christine😃

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Nancy, I tried to stay true to the style and have a bit of fun also a d Thanks for stopping by to read and review this one And for your good luck wishes Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a lovely entry which I am sure will resonate with many voters. Your theme can certainly be embraced by everyone here. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Monica, I hope so it was fun to do and i thought this theme may suit the style also. Glad to share and Thanks for your good wishes Cheers

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Hi Monica, I hope so it was fun to do and i thought this theme may suit the style also. Glad to share and Thanks for your good wishes Cheers