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Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Lyle Load L. Yodel Lincoln"These are fictional character sketches.
17 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this poem.
The rhythm had me tapping my foot as I read along, the story was absolutely delightful. I laughed out loud a couple of times.
Excellent word choices and placement.
This is my favorite of yours to date!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this poem.
The rhythm had me tapping my foot as I read along, the story was absolutely delightful. I laughed out loud a couple of times.
Excellent word choices and placement.
This is my favorite of yours to date!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, EP, for the sesationl review. I have 50 more of them in my portfolio. Their in the BOOK section and called PEOPLE.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love this clever write with humour and warmth and a real pleasure to read. Rhymes spot on with a great use of language which brought the poem to life, loved it, Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Love this clever write with humour and warmth and a real pleasure to read. Rhymes spot on with a great use of language which brought the poem to life, loved it, Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Dolly, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
Ah, another clever take on the names as well as the prolific alliteration. And it all came together to tell a story too! Well done and quite clever.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Ah, another clever take on the names as well as the prolific alliteration. And it all came together to tell a story too! Well done and quite clever.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you, FB, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from robina1978
I don't know who the person in the title is, but I suppose most Americans will. The first stanza is hilarious. The rest of the poem is funny too. The end is love that followed. Nice rhyme all the way.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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I don't know who the person in the title is, but I suppose most Americans will. The first stanza is hilarious. The rest of the poem is funny too. The end is love that followed. Nice rhyme all the way.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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All of these long-named characters are fictional, Ine. Completely made up. Happy day. Bill
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I wondered where this was leading as I read it. Great last line, my friend. I fun write, but so much truth also in it I do think~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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I wondered where this was leading as I read it. Great last line, my friend. I fun write, but so much truth also in it I do think~Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Debbie, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! It just goes to show there is a shoe that fits every foot out there somewhere. This is a delightful read and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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LOL! It just goes to show there is a shoe that fits every foot out there somewhere. This is a delightful read and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you, MA, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Irish Rain
I just love the rhymes here, and the wonderful words you've created...'thunk'...and a girl who only drank store bought milk..love it!!! I really enjoyed this, blessings...
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I just love the rhymes here, and the wonderful words you've created...'thunk'...and a girl who only drank store bought milk..love it!!! I really enjoyed this, blessings...
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Judy, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from BeasPeas
Liked the rhyme pattern and the fun dialect of your poem. If I'm getting this correctly, our hero was more selective than he seemed and was searching for someone prim and proper. If I'm wrong, then let me know. Anyway it is amusing--and he found what he was looking for. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Liked the rhyme pattern and the fun dialect of your poem. If I'm getting this correctly, our hero was more selective than he seemed and was searching for someone prim and proper. If I'm wrong, then let me know. Anyway it is amusing--and he found what he was looking for. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn, for reviewing this. You have assessed its meaning correctly.
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Yay!
Comment from nomi338
Your poem though fun and silly has much to recommend it. Indeed there is so much more to love that sexual satisfaction. Anyone too foolish to know this is doomed to be disappointed time and time again. Very good.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Your poem though fun and silly has much to recommend it. Indeed there is so much more to love that sexual satisfaction. Anyone too foolish to know this is doomed to be disappointed time and time again. Very good.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you, nomi, for checking this out. Bill
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I loved it.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Fun poem. Love the guy's name... fun to say that first line, but it took some practice. I like your humorous stuff. I don't review those tiny three or four line things, tho.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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LOL! Fun poem. Love the guy's name... fun to say that first line, but it took some practice. I like your humorous stuff. I don't review those tiny three or four line things, tho.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Phyllis, for giving Lyle a look see. I write the short poems in about ten minutes in the morning before leaving for work. I rarely promote them so they'll usually only two cents anyway. Saw a Bowl of Stew a whiles a go; guess I'll and read it. Happy day.
