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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Sparkling Air duet"Collection of haikus
6 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of descriptive words to bring forth this unusual phenomena. I like the line "slivers of silver mirrors". It is a delicious use of words that adds to the strength of the poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Excellent use of descriptive words to bring forth this unusual phenomena. I like the line "slivers of silver mirrors". It is a delicious use of words that adds to the strength of the poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your continued support. It is always a pleasure to hear from you.
Blessings, Brother Badger
Comment from MissMerri
Just beautiful Darren. Your descriptive words are strong and the image is beautiful. I liked this very much. I also liked your new profile pic very much. You look amazingly like your father. ;p (Like he used to look, I mean. *wink*) I wish I could hear some of your music. Do you ever play locally? Have you ever made a recording? Or a YouTube video?
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Just beautiful Darren. Your descriptive words are strong and the image is beautiful. I liked this very much. I also liked your new profile pic very much. You look amazingly like your father. ;p (Like he used to look, I mean. *wink*) I wish I could hear some of your music. Do you ever play locally? Have you ever made a recording? Or a YouTube video?
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much. I will play for you in person. Thanks!
Comment from Cranial Thinker
Yes, to walk noticing the elevated whisperings that literally every single day tap us on our shoulders and patting us on our backs in a true encouraging manner it is then we come to that wonderful conclusion of factual truths that we walk among the stars sharing our barrowed space as realisms co-creators carrying nothing but true peace and divine love as our gifted mortar and pistil cementing our sterile beginning to the very newness of our again digressive beginning again comprehending the laws of real life is but a true reflection of our kinetic superlative spoken beginning....Simply beautifully expressed my Brother Badger....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Yes, to walk noticing the elevated whisperings that literally every single day tap us on our shoulders and patting us on our backs in a true encouraging manner it is then we come to that wonderful conclusion of factual truths that we walk among the stars sharing our barrowed space as realisms co-creators carrying nothing but true peace and divine love as our gifted mortar and pistil cementing our sterile beginning to the very newness of our again digressive beginning again comprehending the laws of real life is but a true reflection of our kinetic superlative spoken beginning....Simply beautifully expressed my Brother Badger....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank-you so much for your wonderfully faithful reviews. My kindle broke, and I am working eight days a week, so I have not had very much time to work here. Thank-you, and I will be here more often when work slows down and I can buy a new laptop. Your brother, Darren
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Awesome haiku! I know what you mean about the sparkling air.. it's magical ... That is a beautiful concrete image. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Awesome haiku! I know what you mean about the sparkling air.. it's magical ... That is a beautiful concrete image. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank-you so much for your review; it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Forgive me if it took a while to respond. My kindle broke, and I am working eight days a week. I will be on more often as soon as work slows down, and I can buy a new laptop. Thanks again for your kind words!
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good haiku duet you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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This is a very good haiku duet you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank-you so much for your review; it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Forgive me if it took a while to respond. My kindle broke, and I am working eight days a week. I will be on more often as soon as work slows down, and I can buy a new laptop. Thanks again for your kind words!
Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
did you mean slivers of silver mirrors?
It is excellently done with the interlocking two lines and then the aaaahhhh of the reflecting rainbows
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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did you mean slivers of silver mirrors?
It is excellently done with the interlocking two lines and then the aaaahhhh of the reflecting rainbows
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank-you so much for your review; it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Forgive me if it took a while to respond. My kindle broke, and I am working eight days a week. I will be on more often as soon as work slows down, and I can buy a new laptop. Thanks again for your kind words!
Brother Badger < : - D ~ and thanks for pointing out the typo, I really appreciate your suggestions!
