Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

I loved this! Great explanation of the Ephesians 6 passage. If you had the choice of being on the winning side, why would you choose any other? Good job on this post.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Heidi.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Wow this is amazing! You have earned your stripes as a professional writer, your story is clear, exciting and involving, it is also richly painted with excellent notes from the Bible and an excellent way you have of holding the readers interest and making them want to read more. Your love of God and your faith is admirable, for with faith you will never fall too far from the wayside. sensationally good piece of work cannot wait to read more from you! Well done Meia :)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Meia.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Pat,
this was a lovely story. I hadn't realised you had been in the forces. your story is very comforting and uplifting. You truly are a follower of your God and faith.
I love your photo, you look so happy in that picture. A great read.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Brenda.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A very good story about the army of God, as you certainly brought teachings of Ephesians 6 to life in a personal way. Well written. A fine example.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Treischel.

Comment from MelB

Exceptional

A fun and creative piece, Patricia. I like how you played on the words of being in an earthly army with the heavenly army. It's the only war one can go in and know we come out on the winning side!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thank you for the nice review, Melissa. God put this on my heart to write on Sunday.

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

Great use of the army metaphor which is exactly what St. Paul does for us in Ephesians chapter six. I wonder if you want to use more modern English for "loins" and "gird." I love the picture of you!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

An interesting poem that is very well- written . The well-chosen words flowed line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The background color and artwork completed the piece very well.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Winnona.

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Patricia, very well written. Yes, we have the whole armour of
God to protect us against the devil. You are right we try to
follow His orders, but at times we fail. It's wonderful we can
ask for His forgiveness.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Judy. This one took quite a lot of thought to write.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

refereed to as being training union. (referred)

A very nice write. I didn't realize you had been in the service. Thank you for your service to our country, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Debbie. The Lord gave me the idea for this yesterday.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

This is an amazing write
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
You my friend lead a exciting life and God was with you all the way.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks for the nice review, Cookie.

reply by misscookie on 10-Jan-2017

You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie