Comment from patcelaw

Exceptional

Sandra, What a wonderful poetry honor for this missionary. I love reading the biographies of missionaries. This short poem touched my heart/ We can all be missionaries, even after we get old. Our mission field can be as close as our computer keyboard as we write the truths of God's word in our poetry and our stories. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for the 6 stars, Patricia. It's funny how some things stay with you, isn't it. I really enjoyed her coming to our church. We had a lovely children's Sunday Morning church, and someone always came and told a story. The missionaries were always my favourite. Thanks again, my friend, for the lovely review. :) Sandra xx

Comment from MsPetra

Excellent

Your poem touched me. I enjoyed the sentimentality of it. I especially liked the third stanza. Your rhyming pattern worked well. The meter was spot on. It flowed nicely along. I can't think of an revisions needed.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to reviewing more of your work.

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thank you so very much for this lovely review, MsPetra, I'm delighted you enjoyed my memories of the missionary. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

Oh Sandra, You claim another six What a delightful well written poem /story . You definitely can put words together in such a splendid manner. This keeps the reader spellbound so I think this missionary has rubbed of on you as a story teller. Well done Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Aww, thank you, Christine. I always loved the times they came to our church. They are special people and lovely with it. Thank you so much for the 6 stars, and lovely review, my friend. :) Sandra xxx