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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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this brought back memories of my school mate that became a missionary and the stories she told were absolutely wonderful and enthralling. This is excellently written and a great tribute

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Barb. I always loved the stories. They are very special people, aren't they. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This is truly lovely Sandra. I like the picture you chose for the poem. I can believe they had some wonderful stories to tell. Stories of far off places and people of different cultures. Well done in heptameter and aabb rhyme. xxx Nancy

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Nancy. I always looked forward to their visits to our church, the stories they told kept us children enthralled.
    Big hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from William Ross
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Very nice on the memories of the missionaries you have encountered in your life. i have met an elder women a number of years ago, near a saint of a lady. Thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you, William. They are such special people, aren't they. I'm glad you liked my poem. :) Sandra
Comment from winnona
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A very well- written poem. One that expresses the importance of the deeds that were accomplished by the woman of the poem. She sounds like a very important person in the church,

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you, dear Winnona, for this lovely review. She was really nice, a very spiritual person with so much love, you couldn't help but be drawn to her. Thanks, my friend. :) Sandra x
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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It is a special soul that is called to such a mission. Your poem speaks to that fact beautifully. It flows well and is very soothing when read aloud owing to the smooth and lilting nature of the meter. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    They are special people, aren't they. I have always loved listening to their stories. Thank you so much for the lovely review, my friend. :) xxx
Comment from alexisleech
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As you know, I don't review much poetry these days, but I couldn't resist reading this, and I'm so glad I did! You can feel the gentle grace this lovely woman radiated in every word you've written!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Aww, thank you, Alexis, you are such a lovely lady yourself! Thanks for the 6 stars. Big hugs. :) xxxx
Comment from aryr
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This was so very well done Sandra. It is a great tribute to the missionaries and the work they do throughout the world. Not only the work of sharing God with others but in also sharing the outcomes with people back home who care. Definitely walking in God's embrace/ Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for this lovely review, Alie. It's strange how we remember some things from childhood, this was a special memory I had. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
reply by aryr on 09-Jan-2017
    You are very welcome Sandra, I am finding that as I get older those memories have become fonder.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a well written poem, Sandra, honoring those who give so much of themselves to others. Our church has missionary Sunday in which visiting missionaries come to tell us of their work and ask for financial support. I think all religions have something similar. It's not an easy life for them, but they are willing to try to make life better for others. Marilyn

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much, Marilyn, for this lovely review. I think I loved these missionaries the best with the wonderful stories they told. I would sit there listening to them absolutely enthralled. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Ben Colder
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There is always a certain glow about those who walk with God. They meditate day and night upon His word and fast often. I know His presence and glad you had the experience of hearing and see God at work. Remember, let the little children come to me, such is the Kingdom. Well done, Sandy.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, Ben. I loved it when the missionaries came to tell their stories. I wouldn't miss church for the world when they came. They certainly are special people. Thank again, my dear friend. :) Sandy xx
Comment from heyjude
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Sandra, very nice tribute to the missionaries who told their stories of faraway places. Good job on the rhyming and a nice picture to go with it

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much, Judy, I'm so pleased you liked it. :) Sandra xxx