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Wiggling Her Bottom

Short story of my oldest daughter as a little girl

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Comment from sandy montgomery
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What a precious memory. I could almost picture her myself. This was a very cute story. Thank you for shaing this moment and your work.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Sandy. You can't beat children for funny, innocent lines.
Comment from winnona
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A well-written piece about a happy memory. It is amazing how small children can come up with some of the cutest explanations or the words they use to tell someone something so they will understand it. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting it.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Winnona.
Comment from Sasha
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This is a precious story and one any mother can relate to. Children give us such delightful memories that stay with us forever. Thank you for reminding me of the wonderful television program where Art Linkletter shared such wonderful childhood moments with his audience. I got a real kick out of this one.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Sasha. Yes, children can say and do some very funny and sweet things, which provide for lovely memories.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Patricia, Kids say and do the cutest things! I'm sure you have had plenty of these moments in your lifetime, with three girls.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Melissa. I am sure your son said and did some funny things too.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A very well written cute story. I'm glad you have them. A wonderful picture, my friend. I assume they are all doing well, at least I hope so~Debbie

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Debbie.
Comment from lyenochka
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That is such a precious memory! I am surprised that she wasn't more frightened but I guess since you all assured her what it was, she accepted it as something the earth does. Yes, children open our eyes to so much in life.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review. This was a fun memory to write about.