Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good afternoon
Glad 2 C U R posting again. The sorrow and despair your character experiences speaks of his/her self awareness of a live that escape is not possible. Well done!

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks for your comments. I know it's been quite a while. My business has kept us all very busy here! Thank you again and you take care as well my friend.

Comment from laffad

Excellent

Holy shit. This reminds me of my suicide days. Please tell me this is just venting. I do not wish this kind of feeling upon anyone. Please talk if you need to, dear.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Hi,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and yes I was just venting...no need to worry and thank you for the invitation to talk, I truly appreciate it. Thank you again and blessings my friend.

reply by laffad on 09-Jan-2017

No problem, love. Would you do me the honor of taking a look at my works too?

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi IDAMARTY,
this is a very angry poem about being used as everybody's sounding board, agony aunt, the fixer of all and yet no one is there to listen to your sorrow and woes. The short Sharpe lines without punctuation is perfect for the theme of this poem. Always the bridesmaid never the bride. It's time to think of ones self when they start to feel like this.
A good poem.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I truly appreciate it. Your comments are spot on! Thank you again!