Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Imagination"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from William Ross
very good on the palindrome poem on imagination, I have tried a couple of these, not easy. Great job, thanks for the share and have a great day.
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very good on the palindrome poem on imagination, I have tried a couple of these, not easy. Great job, thanks for the share and have a great day.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
Comment from Bill Schott
This palindrome, Imagination, reflects the cascading descriptions of our imaginations with a reversal of direction which doubles and reinforces the blissful constituents of imagination.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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This palindrome, Imagination, reflects the cascading descriptions of our imaginations with a reversal of direction which doubles and reinforces the blissful constituents of imagination.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Bill, Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from Thomas Bowling
When my children were little, in an attempt to keep them busy I gave them some crayons and paper and told them to use their imaginations and draw something.
"What's imagination?" my daughter asked.
"You know what imagination is," my three-year-old son said. "It's when you're dreaming, but you're awake."
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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When my children were little, in an attempt to keep them busy I gave them some crayons and paper and told them to use their imaginations and draw something.
"What's imagination?" my daughter asked.
"You know what imagination is," my three-year-old son said. "It's when you're dreaming, but you're awake."
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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That's a wonderful answer! Just out of the mouths of babes, and how true! I love it. Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from johnwilson
I would definitely give this a sixth star, alas...Beautiful alliterations all the way! This is such a difficult challenge for me, yet you have mastered this so well. "removed are restrictions
seeker to seeker
dreamer to dreamer
writer to writer"---these words are my favorite part!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I would definitely give this a sixth star, alas...Beautiful alliterations all the way! This is such a difficult challenge for me, yet you have mastered this so well. "removed are restrictions
seeker to seeker
dreamer to dreamer
writer to writer"---these words are my favorite part!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.
jeni
Comment from estory
nice job with this form I liked all the alliterations, they built up a nice tripping, skipping rhythm in this poem. I really liked the 'writer to writer, dreamer to dreamer seeker to seeker' you could really get the connections, and it opened up like a great web, like the internet. nice one estory
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nice job with this form I liked all the alliterations, they built up a nice tripping, skipping rhythm in this poem. I really liked the 'writer to writer, dreamer to dreamer seeker to seeker' you could really get the connections, and it opened up like a great web, like the internet. nice one estory
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
Comment from Janet Foor
Palindromes are a challenge but fun and you seem to have mastered them beautifully. Excellent picture choice and presentation.
Well done.
Janet
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Palindromes are a challenge but fun and you seem to have mastered them beautifully. Excellent picture choice and presentation.
Well done.
Janet
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
Comment from nomi338
Where would we be without imagination. Someone imagined the fairytales like Little Red Riding Hood, Alice in Wonderland, Snow White, etc. all of the fabulous stories we read and loved as children came from someone's imagination. We as writers often deal in imagination, creating worlds that did not exist until we imagined them.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Where would we be without imagination. Someone imagined the fairytales like Little Red Riding Hood, Alice in Wonderland, Snow White, etc. all of the fabulous stories we read and loved as children came from someone's imagination. We as writers often deal in imagination, creating worlds that did not exist until we imagined them.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Pantygynt
This is about as near perfect a palindrome as poetry can get. It really does say the same thing in both directions and paints a delightful picture of a wonderland into the bargain. Very well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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This is about as near perfect a palindrome as poetry can get. It really does say the same thing in both directions and paints a delightful picture of a wonderland into the bargain. Very well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Wow! I'm honored, Jim. Thanks so much!
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Hi there,
Without the imagination that God blessed us with, there would be no
Pegasus, no fairies and no fairy dust. As writers we are inspired by
so many things, some of the world and some not of this world. You did
a great job in voicing, through this poem, the fuel for creativity.
Nicely done,
:) Carolyn
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Hi there,
Without the imagination that God blessed us with, there would be no
Pegasus, no fairies and no fairy dust. As writers we are inspired by
so many things, some of the world and some not of this world. You did
a great job in voicing, through this poem, the fuel for creativity.
Nicely done,
:) Carolyn
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much, Carolyn!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You certainly have a talent for this form which seems to vex many as to write something that touches the spirit both forwards and backwards is a genuine gift. This is absolutely beautiful no matter which way it is read. The imagery is magical and the meter tranquil throughout. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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You certainly have a talent for this form which seems to vex many as to write something that touches the spirit both forwards and backwards is a genuine gift. This is absolutely beautiful no matter which way it is read. The imagery is magical and the meter tranquil throughout. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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I thank you for your very kind review! ❤️
