Why Must Love Die
The evil of cancer5 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully said! Wish I had another six stars to give. Your words moved me. The description of his lovely wife and how the joy of life left her eyes is very true for those who lost the battle. And all the loved ones do wonder why? I think you want the word "complemented" instead of "complimented" but you can decide after reviewing definitions.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Beautifully said! Wish I had another six stars to give. Your words moved me. The description of his lovely wife and how the joy of life left her eyes is very true for those who lost the battle. And all the loved ones do wonder why? I think you want the word "complemented" instead of "complimented" but you can decide after reviewing definitions.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you. Yep, I think you are right and I will edit and change the word. Easy to slip like that sometimes. Thanks for the catch.
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-hundred word story,My Must Love Die,wrings the tears out from readers who know exactly what those feelings and that scenes are like. A short story with a huge backstory.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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This two-hundred word story,My Must Love Die,wrings the tears out from readers who know exactly what those feelings and that scenes are like. A short story with a huge backstory.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
Thank you. My bother's wife died of ovarian cancer when she was only 59. It was so sad and where this story came from.
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well from beginning to end and told the sad story very realistically. Good luck in the contest I think you have done well completing the challenge .
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well from beginning to end and told the sad story very realistically. Good luck in the contest I think you have done well completing the challenge .
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Watching my brother's wife die of cancer is waht inspired this story. It was so very sad.
Comment from marinadawn
So beautiful and yet so sad, I could see through your words the changes that occurred through the progression of this horrible disease and feel her own pain and the pain of him who lost the love of his life . Heart tugging expression
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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So beautiful and yet so sad, I could see through your words the changes that occurred through the progression of this horrible disease and feel her own pain and the pain of him who lost the love of his life . Heart tugging expression
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Thank you. Watching my brother's wife die of cancer is what inspired this story. It was so sad.
Comment from Thesis
Beautiful heartfelt story. I liked how you described the dying character and her transformation from health to death, along with her husband's hand holding and finally the only question to ask, Why? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Beautiful heartfelt story. I liked how you described the dying character and her transformation from health to death, along with her husband's hand holding and finally the only question to ask, Why? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you. It's hard to get everything in so short a story but I enjoy the challenge
