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Not As It Appears

Sometimes things are not what they appear to be.

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This two hundred word story, Not As It Appears, says a lot about the travails of a cop on the beat in a high school. Then there's the jealous and sometimes mistrusting spouse. Makes for a lovely experience, I'm sure.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    I have to say that today's society is much less modest than when I was growing up. High School girls are much more aggressive than what I experienced in High School and sex has become an acceptable activity for them than ever. Add a wife who thinks she's getting old, a picture of a seductive girl and you have the perfect situation for a disaster. Thanks for reading, Bill.