Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Carolyn, Amen sweet girl...I love making my grandkids laugh so I can hear them...it is a wonderful sound...it music to our ears...very nicely written you...I love your poem...and your picture...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017

Hi Linda, so good to see you... thank you, for this wonderful review. Hope you are doing well...
Love, :) Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 12-Jan-2017

I am doing fine sweet girl...hope you are doing fine as well...big smiles...xxoo love

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

Nicely written, children playing and their giggles certainly are lovely sounds to listen to. It is the sound of happiness and joy for sure. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thank you, so very much for stopping by, for the lovely review, and best wishes.
:) Carolyn

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Good job with this short 2-4-2. You've made the most of your word choices. That is a great sound, especially when it comes from our own kids and grandkids. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017

Thanks, I love the sound of little one giggling. :) Glad you do too, and that you liked the way
the poem is written. :) Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Oh, I like this!!! Wish I had six stars for you!! 'Joy noise!' How original. And they do echo in our memories!! Lovely entry here! Blessings...

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for the lovely review and best wishes . :) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I am not a fan of this style, but yours is cute. There are just two few syllables to communicate much. These poems make haiku look like a long novel. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you Debbie, :) Carolyn

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

I have always enjoyed the laughter of my kids and their friends at play. When they became teens, there was a park not far from my home and I would at times go and sit, read and enjoy the noise. This is a truly wonderful contest entry and your choice of artwork really adds a great dimension to your words I wish you good luck with this contest,,,,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you Jim, for the kind words, delightful story, and best wishes. :) Carolyn

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written my friend yes there is nothing like the sound of children at play you have presented the poem well good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Than you Jill, :) Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Notesandmore,

I loved the little poem that you have written.
And also the wonderful picture of the boy and girl swinging.
You always write great poems and stories and I always enjoy reading them.

I give thanks to you, Kat

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

That is sweet Kat. Thank you for the grew review. Hope you are feeling well. :) Carolyn

Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words captured the feeling of children playing.I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well, good luck

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thanks winnona, :) Carolyn

Comment from Deniz22

Exceptional

Brief, but sweet and true. Happy days of childhood...nice to recapture for a few moments. And yet we are called to joy too even as we are supported by God's Spirit in the midst of adult responsibilities. Good thoughts, thank you, Dennis

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you so much :)