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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We certainly live in a deceptive world where nothing is what it seems and your short poem speaks volumes, good write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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We certainly live in a deceptive world where nothing is what it seems and your short poem speaks volumes, good write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the critique zanya
Comment from Lu Saluna
yes, this is very good. Tweets are very deceiving. I find it very disturbing the President elect using tweet to do a great deal of his communicating. Your 2-4-2 is not only timely it is somewhat prophetic.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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yes, this is very good. Tweets are very deceiving. I find it very disturbing the President elect using tweet to do a great deal of his communicating. Your 2-4-2 is not only timely it is somewhat prophetic.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Yes should be interesting ! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from palaceofmind
You did a nice job of choosing words with an impact while still staying within the syllable count. The word 'deceive' left a particularly strong impression. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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You did a nice job of choosing words with an impact while still staying within the syllable count. The word 'deceive' left a particularly strong impression. Nicely done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from laffad
I just have one question... Is this in reference to Trump? If it is, I don't blame you for not liking him. But it's a nice poem. I am not too much of a fan of the green color but it is not my opinion that matters.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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I just have one question... Is this in reference to Trump? If it is, I don't blame you for not liking him. But it's a nice poem. I am not too much of a fan of the green color but it is not my opinion that matters.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from mvbrooks
As I read this, I wonder if it is a veiled message regarding the recent election and the habit of one candidate to take his "old views" and "dress" them in modern tweets.
With so few words, this poem proves to be rather clever. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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As I read this, I wonder if it is a veiled message regarding the recent election and the habit of one candidate to take his "old views" and "dress" them in modern tweets.
With so few words, this poem proves to be rather clever. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, not being very computer savvy... I am quite embarrassed to say I don't even know what a tweet is, ha ha...I am WAY behind the times, don't even own a cell phone, don't want one....but...if a tweet is like a Facebook post...I agree. Forgive my ignorance, blessings...
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Well, not being very computer savvy... I am quite embarrassed to say I don't even know what a tweet is, ha ha...I am WAY behind the times, don't even own a cell phone, don't want one....but...if a tweet is like a Facebook post...I agree. Forgive my ignorance, blessings...
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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The new Pres tweets his policies to the world !!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for reading zanya
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Oh...THAT's a tweet!!! Duh!
Comment from Dean Kuch
H-m-m-mmmmmm... This could ( and I'm not saying it is) pertain to our new President elect, Sir Donald Trump, and his addiction to tweeting., or...
It's a male Peacock who's havin' a really bad day.
Best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest, Zanya.
~Dean
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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H-m-m-mmmmmm... This could ( and I'm not saying it is) pertain to our new President elect, Sir Donald Trump, and his addiction to tweeting., or...
It's a male Peacock who's havin' a really bad day.
Best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest, Zanya.
~Dean
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Enjoyed reading this critique !!zanya
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is an amazing piece of work, about the deceptions and deciepts of the new internet driven world. No longer is man the ruler of himself as a new age dawns with the endless 'net' stretching before us. This poem conveys all that and more most effectively.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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This is an amazing piece of work, about the deceptions and deciepts of the new internet driven world. No longer is man the ruler of himself as a new age dawns with the endless 'net' stretching before us. This poem conveys all that and more most effectively.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Interesting image.
-Good format.
-I like your approach to the poem, Zanya.
-It has a very good message.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Have a good 2017.
-I will be back to posting in the near future.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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-Interesting image.
-Good format.
-I like your approach to the poem, Zanya.
-It has a very good message.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Have a good 2017.
-I will be back to posting in the near future.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Great review thanks for reading zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Good one Zanya - very topical and so true. It is not easy to get a message across in so few words - you have just done so, an done it well. Good read and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Good one Zanya - very topical and so true. It is not easy to get a message across in so few words - you have just done so, an done it well. Good read and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Great review thanks for reading zanya
