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Collection of haikus
3 total reviews
Comment from
Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. Lighting strikes the tree from the sky and leaves a visible current. It is an incredible photograph of the lighting striking the tree.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Thank you so much, Sandra. Hopefully you caught the pun, current as present, and electric.
Darren
Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
Badger,
I enjoyed your haiku on air. Good job on its style. The picture is really unique. I like the personification of the tree & the play on words in the satori.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Thank you so much for catching the pun. I really appreciate your comments!
Brother Badger
Comment from
DR DIP
Whoa!Is this genuine or photo shopped that is an amazing photo if it is genuine I have never seen it before like this great capture by the photographer.
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Thanks again for reading and reviewing, you have been a very loyal reviewer.
Darren
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