Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like how this poem is from the fish's viewpoint. It is also rare to read a poem about fish. Excellent haiku that creates a feeling for the fish and a strong image of nature.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

T y so much, technical difficulties. I'll be back soon, Thanks again!

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Hehe sad really I enjoy the way you take an obvious unusual situation and explain the consequences in 3 lines a good accompanying photo to substantiate your words

dip

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thanks Doc, I appreciate your comments.
Brother Badger

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

I think you like fish, or at least poems about fishing , if my memory serves me I have read your fish poem before. A nice presentation and a perfectly wonderful Haiku. Keep writing I would like to read more.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Yes, I have utilized fish more than one time.
I really appreciate your comments.
Brother Badger

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. Fish have a hard time to breath outside the water, while we find it impossible to breath under water.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Nice dichotomy, I really appreciate your comments, and your perspective is always illuminating.
Thanks, Darren