Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Short and sweet poems tonight Badger Another fine picture though a bit pixilated maybe? anyways it matters not You have described birds in flight perfectly

Dip

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

---

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Forgive me, I was enjoying pixie sticks while playing pick up sticks, and some of the pixels got stuck.
Got a tooth pixel?

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

the birds of the air 5
neither toil, nor labor 6
yet, want for nothing 5

the birds of the air neither toil, nor labor yet, want for nothing

Good flow and cadence, less than 16 syllables is very good, and a nice meaning about faith in God, the provider.

Good job!


Mathews 6:26

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

---

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate your comments

Darren

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. The birds always seem to chirp happily from early morning until late in the evening. Never complain about their hard work to build nests and feed their chicks.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

---

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, and for enjoying birdsong with me.
Darren

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

they fight for life just like we do, but they are taken care of, just like we are.
There is always a way to those that believe and learn to trust on a power highter then they.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

---

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thanks so much, Barb. I really appreciate your comments, and your appreciation of our fellowshipping.
Darren