Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Darren,

An awesome haiku :)

lovely dove flying you will be very tasty with butter and salt = 17 traditional syllabic count.

lovely dove flying you will be very tasty with butter and salt = good phase flow

no satori or kireji and on the humor side :) good job, my friend!

Gypsy Sensei

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you so much. I knew that I would ruffle a few feathers with this one! I am so happy that you saw and accepted the humor.
Darren

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

haha 2 parts to this haiku the tranquil picturesque image and gracefulness of two flying doves but then the unfortunate demise of them on the dinner table I have never heard of people eating dove before but that's not to say it is not a cooee cooee delicacy! lol

dip

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Yes,, we shot wild doves in Wyoming,
. It took a few to make a meal. As I am an accomplished chef, I know how to make them tender and tasty. Tastes like chicken.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Bro I found this to be a bit hard hearted yet a humor fill haiku. Butter and salt indeed, but I'll take a big chicken which is more to eat. LOL Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Now you got me laughing. I knew that I was going to ruffle some feathers with this one, as that was part of the intent!
Thanks again for your perspective and comments.
Brother Badger

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. Although it will break my heart to kill those lovely doves for dinner to enjoy with butter and salt. An excellent photo.

Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thank You so much for taking the time to read and review. I knew I would ruffle some feathers; thanks for your palatable understanding!
Brother Badger

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written haiku. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks Teri7, I really appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read and review.
Brother Badger

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aww, that's not nice, but I had to giggle! No, I LOL!!! I love these
little ones you are writing, they are so good. Well done, my friend.
:) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks for your loyalty, and for catching the naughty shock value which I intended. I am so pleased that the humor over rode the cruelty!
Brother Badger