senryu (blushing maid)
senryu 3-6-533 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, just got back from my moms...who has no net...she was not doing so well...turns out she broke her pelvic bone...but she is doing better...what was left behind that made the maid blush???...LOL...very well written sweetie...and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, just got back from my moms...who has no net...she was not doing so well...turns out she broke her pelvic bone...but she is doing better...what was left behind that made the maid blush???...LOL...very well written sweetie...and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Blushing Maid, seems to suggest that the maid won't be turning down the bed, but saying yes to messing it up.
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This senryu, Blushing Maid, seems to suggest that the maid won't be turning down the bed, but saying yes to messing it up.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from closetpoetjester
LOL Nuthin' like airing the dirty linen but hey what a very cool satori!
Thank Christ she didn't crack out her special blue light that shows up all the stains like Gordon Ramsay does when he films Hotel Nightmares.
Oh God if those walls could talk.
No matter...the maids make up for it hahaha
Top write. Well done.
P
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LOL Nuthin' like airing the dirty linen but hey what a very cool satori!
Thank Christ she didn't crack out her special blue light that shows up all the stains like Gordon Ramsay does when he films Hotel Nightmares.
Oh God if those walls could talk.
No matter...the maids make up for it hahaha
Top write. Well done.
P
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done well using the limitations of this form this is very beautiful good luck in the contest my friend regards Jill
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Yes you have done well using the limitations of this form this is very beautiful good luck in the contest my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a well penned Senryu with correct line and syllable count. Your message is sensually full of hot stuff as the artwork shows and well executed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is a well penned Senryu with correct line and syllable count. Your message is sensually full of hot stuff as the artwork shows and well executed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The words flow well and combine easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork is beautiful and completes the piece well.
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A well-written contest entry. The words flow well and combine easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork is beautiful and completes the piece well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from angel123
What an interesting artwork choice. It heats up your poem and it's message of lust. It flows well and good luck in the contest.
angel123
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What an interesting artwork choice. It heats up your poem and it's message of lust. It flows well and good luck in the contest.
angel123
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Michael, the artwork adds to this very good senyru contest entry! I must admit that I am not adept in reviewing senyru poetry. All I can tell you is I enjoyed reading the words of apparently to people experiencing those intense hot feelings of the possibility of love. I wish you good luck in this contest and I will accept any abomination concerning my lack of knowledge to review the senyru,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
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Michael, the artwork adds to this very good senyru contest entry! I must admit that I am not adept in reviewing senyru poetry. All I can tell you is I enjoyed reading the words of apparently to people experiencing those intense hot feelings of the possibility of love. I wish you good luck in this contest and I will accept any abomination concerning my lack of knowledge to review the senyru,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
Comment from crzypnter
mikey,
Great play on words here mikey. Sultry and sexy I in few words. Great job good luck ok in the contest
August
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mikey,
Great play on words here mikey. Sultry and sexy I in few words. Great job good luck ok in the contest
August
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
Comment from Rubylou
Blushing as well as on fire! Nicely written Senryu, Mikie.
I can feel my own cheeks burning. LOL Another great write.
Rubylou
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Blushing as well as on fire! Nicely written Senryu, Mikie.
I can feel my own cheeks burning. LOL Another great write.
Rubylou
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
