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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Emotional Eruption"Collection of haikus
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Comment from Cranial Thinker
To suppress emotions is to give way in do time to an eruption of coherent and incoherent oration the pressure of holding back becomes an impossible something though to spare the room of intelligent beings of ones open display of unearthed intense emotions inwardly is such a satisfying relieving act that burns until it reaches the open waters....I truly enjoyed this very much my Brother Badger....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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To suppress emotions is to give way in do time to an eruption of coherent and incoherent oration the pressure of holding back becomes an impossible something though to spare the room of intelligent beings of ones open display of unearthed intense emotions inwardly is such a satisfying relieving act that burns until it reaches the open waters....I truly enjoyed this very much my Brother Badger....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I knew that you, of all here, would appreciate this post.
I really appreciate your comments!
Brother Badger
Comment from MissMerri
Excellent expression of emotional volcanoes, Darren. I always enjoy how you choose strong verbs and can express so much in a few words. This is a perfect example. I liked it very much. Hope your year is starting with a big bang. It seems you have so much to say and I'm delighted that you've found a way to share your thoughts.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Excellent expression of emotional volcanoes, Darren. I always enjoy how you choose strong verbs and can express so much in a few words. This is a perfect example. I liked it very much. Hope your year is starting with a big bang. It seems you have so much to say and I'm delighted that you've found a way to share your thoughts.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, you are a cool drink in a parched and Harris land.
Looking forward to meeting.
Brother Badger
Comment from mermaids
"Words are erupting" is such a powerful last line. Words do erupt, so true. Excellent use of the haiku form that shows how emotions do lead to words that can be strong.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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"Words are erupting" is such a powerful last line. Words do erupt, so true. Excellent use of the haiku form that shows how emotions do lead to words that can be strong.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments!
Brother Badger
Comment from DR DIP
What an analogy Words erupting from a volcano with a lava of adverbs, verbs, nouns prepositions, adjectives, indefinite and definite articals great image accompanying as well
great write in only 3 lines you have said it all
dip
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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What an analogy Words erupting from a volcano with a lava of adverbs, verbs, nouns prepositions, adjectives, indefinite and definite articals great image accompanying as well
great write in only 3 lines you have said it all
dip
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate your comments.
Darren
