Paradise. Part 2.
Josh is gone.17 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written second part of the story. The words flowed well and picked up easily from the last part. The story is very realistic and details and realistic characters flowed and combines bringing the story to life.
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A well-written second part of the story. The words flowed well and picked up easily from the last part. The story is very realistic and details and realistic characters flowed and combines bringing the story to life.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your review, Winnona.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Having lost my own husband on the 7th December back in 1986, I can feel her pain. My husband was only 46. I will read this with a lot of interest to see how she copes now. I had two young children to raise, so the story is quite similar at this point to my own life. Excellent writing, and very believably written. :) Sandra
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Having lost my own husband on the 7th December back in 1986, I can feel her pain. My husband was only 46. I will read this with a lot of interest to see how she copes now. I had two young children to raise, so the story is quite similar at this point to my own life. Excellent writing, and very believably written. :) Sandra
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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I'm so sorry for your loss, Sandra. It must be terrible to lose one's husband.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
As a POV this is excellently written and so full of pure emotion and the descriptions make it so very real. The interaction is what one would expect from the players. Very good
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As a POV this is excellently written and so full of pure emotion and the descriptions make it so very real. The interaction is what one would expect from the players. Very good
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading, Barb.
Comment from robyn corum
Ooohh... great cliff hanger, MJ. Great job with this one. One thing I love about your writing is the way you can crawl into characters and truly make them your own. You are great at prose. Really good. Thanks!
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Ooohh... great cliff hanger, MJ. Great job with this one. One thing I love about your writing is the way you can crawl into characters and truly make them your own. You are great at prose. Really good. Thanks!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading, Robyn.
Comment from patcelaw
Maria, this is a wonderful story and a pleasure for me to read. There is grief, pain and sorrow, but there is hope here as well. Thank you so much for this write and sharing it with us. In reading it I was taken back 21+ years ago, to the death of my dear husband. He was not tragically killed in an accident, but from serious health problems. I experienced many of the same emotions that Heather had at the graveside. Happy New Year. Patricia
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Maria, this is a wonderful story and a pleasure for me to read. There is grief, pain and sorrow, but there is hope here as well. Thank you so much for this write and sharing it with us. In reading it I was taken back 21+ years ago, to the death of my dear husband. He was not tragically killed in an accident, but from serious health problems. I experienced many of the same emotions that Heather had at the graveside. Happy New Year. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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It must be a terrible thing to lose one's husband.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Sometimes we get so busy and buried with our own stuff we seem to rate more precious than our loved ones that we abandon them for earthly things.
Happy New year.
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Sometimes we get so busy and buried with our own stuff we seem to rate more precious than our loved ones that we abandon them for earthly things.
Happy New year.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading, Sandra.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Maria
this is a very sad story, the same thing happened to Tom my husband only he was not hurt, but if I had gone with him I would be dead now.
I will try to keep up with the story, I am still in the travelling mode, we are in Spain for a week and back in Ireland, so I am not getting to fanstory much, I am doing too much celebrating. Happy new year, Mary
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Hi Maria
this is a very sad story, the same thing happened to Tom my husband only he was not hurt, but if I had gone with him I would be dead now.
I will try to keep up with the story, I am still in the travelling mode, we are in Spain for a week and back in Ireland, so I am not getting to fanstory much, I am doing too much celebrating. Happy new year, Mary
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
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I'm glad your'e having a great Christmas. Celebrating is good.
You know my story is fictional, don't you? Some other reviewers thought it was real...
Thanks for reading.
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I do know it is fictional, but it did happen in real life with my husband. nobody died thankfully.
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I'm glad to hear that. Take care.
