Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

A true nightmare indeed my Brother Badger to know the before is to relive the after effects time and time again but to close that previous chapter is to escape the memories and become totally swallowed up by the newness that is so very well received simply because the expression often used within our earthly walk is a deepened desire to become truly free so to truly achieve that is so awe inspiring....Write my Brother Write....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thanks again for the awesome review.
Darren

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Taken by the bowels of the Earth! I can understand your phobia What a frightening experience to be"eaten" by a road. I assuming you die in this phobia judging by the lines previous chapter
finally I'm free

dip

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017

Thanks for tying those together, I did not see the connection until then.
Very astute observation, my fine feathered friend~
Brother Badger

Comment from Zandria

Exceptional

Very good. The flow is fantastic and the wording is great. Sharing a fear in a public place is very brave and goes a long way to show our fantastic character. Your piece causes me at least and maybe others to pause in their day and think about life as it is and what if tomorrow could be the end.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments, and wish you a very Happy New Year.
Brother Badger

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

When I see pictures or hear stories of sinkholes, it does make me a bit leary about the possibility of the earth swallowing us whole. Nicely done for the haiku. Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your perspective. Happy New Year to you and yours, Brother Badger

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a horrible way to go, being swallowed up by the earth, must be a horrible phobia Darren. There are sinkholes that appear from nowhere sometimes, you're becoming a skill at these haiku, well done, my friend, blessings, HNY, Roy

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016

Thanks, Roy. I really appreciate your comments.
A very Happy New Year to you and yours,
Brother Badger

reply by royowen on 01-Jan-2017

You too Darren, and most welcome

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. We all have fears of some kind that can cripple us until we can overcome our fears then we set ourselves free from the burden of fear.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments.
Happy New Year, Brother Badger