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Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "He's got the whole world"
Collection of haikus

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Comment from mermaids
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This is a feel good poem. I admire your use of rhyming words. There is also a musical feel and flow to your words. This is a positive poems for the new year. It makes the reader think.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    Thank-you so much for your review; it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Forgive me if it took a while to respond. My kindle broke, and I am working eight days a week. I will be on more often as soon as work slows down, and I can buy a new laptop. Thanks again for your kind words!
    Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from DR DIP
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"He's got the whole world in his hands, he's got the whole world in his hands
I am not religious Badge but I do appreciate your intent and thoughts in this short poem

dip

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thank-you, it was my goal to write two haikus in which all stanzas rhyme.
    I appreciate your comments.
    Darren
Comment from wondertwin
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This Haiku is beautiful and in 3 lines and 15 words you did a terrific job rhyming it together. Very well done. Love to hear God's truth spoken :) AmyJo

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thank-you, I really appreciate your comments. Here's wishing you a Happy Friday ~
    B.B.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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A truly inspiring observation. Yes, He surrounds us all with love - even those who do not recognize it. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thank you Mystic, I appreciate your comments. Have you ever sailed Into the Mystic?
reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 30-Dec-2016
    LOL! Nope can't say I sailed there but I have done some sailing. It's a good song though :).
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thanks for recognising, that was the inference.
reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 30-Dec-2016
    It is a song I have sung many times. I tend to be moved by lyrics and its are lovely.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Not many religious poems touch me as this short, sweet and touching rhyme did.I love everything about it and its simplicity adds to its power.I am bookcasing it it is fantastic and flawless, Bravo!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much much, measures, considering the amount of religious prose here, I am truly honored. My mind wrote this one while I was sleeping, inspired by The Holy Spirit.
reply by Meia (MESAYERS) on 30-Dec-2016
    I understand what you mean by that because I myself have been blessed to meet with Christ and The blessed Virgin in a similar way.I feel so honoured and it helped me through the darkest time of my life.In dreams and half dreams, I am also honoured to speak with you as you have been through the same.x
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
    The honor is ours~