A Lotus Can Grow
With a little sunshine11 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Lovely poem with a very positive and powerful message, Anonymous Poet.
At least if we have hope, then we have something to cling to.
Good rhyming all throughout your composition.
May you fare well in the contest.
~Dean :}
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Lovely poem with a very positive and powerful message, Anonymous Poet.
At least if we have hope, then we have something to cling to.
Good rhyming all throughout your composition.
May you fare well in the contest.
~Dean :}
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging review. After reading an article on kids who beat the odds to improve their lot in life, I felt this was an appropriate metaphor.
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It's an excellent metaphor, especially considering how and where lotus flowers grow and bloom.
You're welcome, and good luck. :)
