Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well. I think you completed the challenge of the contest. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017

Thank you for reading and the positive review zanya

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

You have touched on a most important aspect
of love. . .though the flames of passion may
excite the body - it is the simmering embers
that warm the heart and soul, long, long after
the spark and blaze of love has been dampered :-)

Very nicely done :-)


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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Oh, they can absolutely still linger, and for quite some time, too!
Then there are things one can do to fan those dying embers, like breathing a little romance into the mix, or saying"I love you" everyday.
It might seem simple to some, but it truly matters.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Jan-2017

Sure.