Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

The soul, what a wonderful look see into the actualized continuance of seeing transference of energy in some form or another that the remembrance between on another becomes blurred in time but the education remains in tact watering the new root mass blessed with the ability of locomotion while being endowed with the history of time, changing hands of counted steps because that which is unseen remain enshrined inside of the hall's of absolute freeness....I enjoyed the write my Brother Badger well done....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for understanding my writing, you see the TRUE beauty behind the words.
Brother Badger

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

energy entwined

in existentialism...I have never heard of this word before
existentialism...n a philosophical movement stressing personal experience and responsibility of the individual who is seenas a free agent
wrapped in earthen shells

This is rather cryptic in meaning to me badger though I am rather simple lol
I will work on it for sure

dip

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

I recommend other sources for definition, they vary wildly . . .

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, I like the way you think. I believe that energy doesn't go away and that the spirit never dies. I am not sure how it all works but that is not my job.

Gypsy Sensei

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate your comments. Brother Badger

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

My beliefs, exactly. I believe God created the world, and us, as energy. Energy changes form, but never dies. Energy attracts that which is on the same vibration with itself, this is how we create our worlds, God created us in His image...creators. Love this. Wish I had six stars for you!!!! Happy new Year!!!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank-You so much, Irish,. Through your eyes, my fancy attentive friend (Dead Air~Dark Light), I gain an even greater understanding of my work; your loving acknowledgement binds us closer. Happy New Year,
Brother Badger ~

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

The earthen shell as a metaphor for the human body is novel and creative. The energy in this poem is palpable and gives energy to the very brief poem itself.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank-you MaryKelly, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review; I appreciate your comments.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Lovely word on middle line existentialism I don't think I can say it aloud again good use of words to emphasize your meaning well done I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank-you so much, I love sharing with you ~
Brother Badger