Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

I'm wondering if you've read this one out loudly yourself and felt your inner expressiveness syllable by syllable so as to draw in the true parallel of the deepness of what you have unknowingly unearthed for all who reads these words aloud because our very own likeness sparkles just as the Gargantuan Grapes and the dew is the quickening that lifted us up making our very souls reflect the place of which we originated and the invisible enhanced none verbal language capable of moving both in true reflective resonating response, thus lies the reflective parallel in the realism of your gifted orated exhalations....Bravo my Brother Badger Bravo!!!!....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017

Thank you Cranial, that's using your head!
Brother Badger

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a marvelous haiku. The grapes do indeed reflect earth with their dew. This is a poem that makes the reader feel good. Excellent use of words that connect together perfectly.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thank you so much, I really appreciated your earthy review.
Darren

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Now this one I feel i can understand not cryptic and with a great accompanying photo. Did you write this inspired by the photo or did you find a photo to fit?

dip

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

I wrote, then looked. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Gargantuan Grapes laden with sparkling dew reflecting the earth

I like your earth haiku. Your phrase is well connected and the satori gives a nice insight into the observation. The image of the earth reflecting on the grape and dew is a beautiful one.

Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank you, Gypsy. With your well rounded attitude, you see more than some, and you have broadened my horizon with your own special perspective. Thanks,
BB

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Another lovely example of the form with spot on construction from syllable count to implied kigo. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank-you Mystic, as you are a mystery to me. I appreciate your comments.
Brother Badger

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes I love this very good word choices used that makes this descriptive and creative you have done very well I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks, we're Happy ~