Comment from angel123

Excellent

Wonderful, wonderful, poem. I enjoyed reading it and it flows well with a nice message about nature. Your artwork choice is excellent and it enhances your message.

angel123

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thank you so much for the read and the comment.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your words flow well and combined easily forming the message of the poem. The artwork completed the piece very well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thank you.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the contest
with exactly seven words
even managed to seek a rhyme in there
Our fireflies are more yellow than green
but this picture is perfect for your poem
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for your read and the comments.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You did a lovely job with your limited word choices. You managed to paint a serenely delightful portrait in the reader's mind. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank you Angel for the read and the comment.