Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Very clever haiku with three of the seasons taking centre stage in this. Love the artwork you've chosen to go with this haiku, very apt, fragile winter dance.
Well done with this,
cheers.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review, I love the idea of the seasons taking their turns dancing onto the stage. Cheers, j

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really liked this finely written piece. Great imagery produced with the ballet metaphor. very well observed and executed.

best of luck
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review. A little early for spring, but I like the idea of the seasons dancing in. Cheers, j