Comment from mermaids

Excellent

It is a comfort to think of God guiding us and the creatures of the earth. There is a spiritual feel to your words. Excellent use of words and haiku form that mixes the spiritual with nature.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017

Thanks for taking the time to read and and review, it is always a pleasant surprise to get a response after the promo period is over. I really appreciate your comments!, and A very Bright and prosperous New Year to you.
Brother Badger

Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

So wonderfully written my brother as I understand birth is actually the ending of a grand beginning because the brain begins to perceive mindfulness and the true journey takes to flight thus the exhalation Providence is so closely related to choices causing ones visions to become long or short depending on the perspective ones own inner hearts learning truths by accepting the actualized parallel representation of the very likeness in everything born of divine quickening us solid/so touchable yet we move as gifted animated spirits knowing the wonderfulness of just being so is not Heaven in the very same context of imagery? Earth is a transposed literary visible blessing sharing the invisibleness of the so obviously seen....Wonderfully written and profoundly expressed....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016

Quickening. You blow my mind! That word occurs 13 times in the King James bible, nine of which are in psalm 119
I have said it before, but that is undeniably further Concrete proof of our entwined predestination. Brother, you are a catalytic
converter!
Brother Darren
Peace be with you, and be
Filled with
The
Spirit~

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Nice words Badger
the worth of earth's birth... Like this line like the rhyming alliteration is that what they call this grammatical name?

can obviously be seen

by its Providence

Well done

dip

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks Doc. I do not remember, grammatically speaking, but I will research and get back. I am going to edit to try another combo. Appreciate the review. D

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow very deep and you seem to take your pieces into the rhelm of thinking and figuring out. The creation of the Earth is mystical in itself.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you much, Barb. You have given Mr consistently faithful reviews, and it is always a pleasure to hear from you. Happy New Year, Brother Badger

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes I liked this it is definitely an original poem that says so much in a few words a strong poem indeed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, Happy, I am happy too to get your review!
Brother Badger