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2/10/2 syllable poem7 total reviews
Comment from RazorFace
Very nice poem. It has good mental image (Times archive) I am not sure if time is suppose to be capitalized or not. I like the poem though and I am sure you will do well in the contest.
Garry
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
Very nice poem. It has good mental image (Times archive) I am not sure if time is suppose to be capitalized or not. I like the poem though and I am sure you will do well in the contest.
Garry
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Bravo for using such poetic metaphor succeeding in bringing in the timely New Year theme in so few words! I like how the "mosaic palette" matches the visual of the single firework explosion and how the last line simply states the new status of the previous year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
Bravo for using such poetic metaphor succeeding in bringing in the timely New Year theme in so few words! I like how the "mosaic palette" matches the visual of the single firework explosion and how the last line simply states the new status of the previous year!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and engaging zanya
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Congrats on the finish! You had my vote.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is a clever use of your imagination. It's well-written and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
angel123
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is a clever use of your imagination. It's well-written and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.
angel123
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
How quickly they pass as today's news soon becomes an archive. I thought your approach very creative and timely as we close this year and look forward to the new one. I wish you the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
How quickly they pass as today's news soon becomes an archive. I thought your approach very creative and timely as we close this year and look forward to the new one. I wish you the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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And thank you for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your background color and artwork completed the piece well
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your background color and artwork completed the piece well
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from mbroyles2
Soon 2016 will be the past just like you described. It has seen alot. A historic election, many of our legends that we grew up with have passed, and Brexit.
Nicely written in clear crisps word.
Happy new year
Michael
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
Soon 2016 will be the past just like you described. It has seen alot. A historic election, many of our legends that we grew up with have passed, and Brexit.
Nicely written in clear crisps word.
Happy new year
Michael
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and a creative contest entry that is presented well I love the picture it enhances the poem well good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
Yes this is well written and a creative contest entry that is presented well I love the picture it enhances the poem well good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya