When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 110 "The Red Purse"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from w.j.debi
Maybe I'm a bit sentimental, but I got teary at the end of this chapter. That red purse may mean much more than anyone realizes. I hope she does think of you every time she carries it.
You know how to capture feeling and convey it to the reader through your excellent narrative voice, descriptions and use of dialog. The demonstration of how your calls generally go was most effective. Also, the conversation in the shop.
I see you were nominated for Book of the Month. Well deserved.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Maybe I'm a bit sentimental, but I got teary at the end of this chapter. That red purse may mean much more than anyone realizes. I hope she does think of you every time she carries it.
You know how to capture feeling and convey it to the reader through your excellent narrative voice, descriptions and use of dialog. The demonstration of how your calls generally go was most effective. Also, the conversation in the shop.
I see you were nominated for Book of the Month. Well deserved.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, debi, for the wonderful review and exceptional rating. That this chapter made you emotional is the highest compliment a writer can get.
Hugs,
Shari
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You are most welcome, Shari.
Comment from F. Wehr3
Congrats on being nominated for book of the month! Sorry, I missed this originally, the holidays. Very heartfelt piece and I nice visit with your daughter and even Jeff.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Congrats on being nominated for book of the month! Sorry, I missed this originally, the holidays. Very heartfelt piece and I nice visit with your daughter and even Jeff.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Russell. Better late than never. And it's so nice to feel close to my daughter again.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The verbal structure of the story reminisces a tale of rapprochement between the protagonist and her daughter, Nichole inadvertently mired in a frosty relationship.
The work highlights renewed rapport between Jeff and the protagonist and her daughter's reciprocation with hugs and smiles.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that approximately replicates the evolving good relationship examplified in the Christian Movie, "War Room" by Kendricks Brothers Production.
Outstanding social rehabilitation initiative. Keep the flag flying.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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The verbal structure of the story reminisces a tale of rapprochement between the protagonist and her daughter, Nichole inadvertently mired in a frosty relationship.
The work highlights renewed rapport between Jeff and the protagonist and her daughter's reciprocation with hugs and smiles.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that approximately replicates the evolving good relationship examplified in the Christian Movie, "War Room" by Kendricks Brothers Production.
Outstanding social rehabilitation initiative. Keep the flag flying.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much, Lloyd, for the exceptional rating and insightful review. I'll check out that movie.
Favorite remark:Nichole inadvertently mired in a frosty relationship.
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Ride on Spitfire!
Keep on flourishing!
Comment from padumachitta
Hi You
Happy new Year to you and yours...
I am glad to read this wee healing story...it gives me hope that things will or have turned out all right.
I gotta look up play...is there a movie, casue we are kinda short playhouses here...
padumachitta
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Hi You
Happy new Year to you and yours...
I am glad to read this wee healing story...it gives me hope that things will or have turned out all right.
I gotta look up play...is there a movie, casue we are kinda short playhouses here...
padumachitta
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Yes, There is a movie with the same title. I just ordered it from Netflix to watch for the second time. Thanks for the review.
Happy New Year.
Hugs,
Shari
Comment from mermaids
I can't imagine the variety of beer with those flavors, bur I am not a beer drinker.
It sounds like your relationship with your daughter is getting onto a good track.
Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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I can't imagine the variety of beer with those flavors, bur I am not a beer drinker.
It sounds like your relationship with your daughter is getting onto a good track.
Happy New Year.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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It is indeed, mermaids. Thanks for the R& R.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I ask about her two pugs and Jeff in that order. LMAO!
Calorific - love that word
The ending brought me to tears, Shari. I'm so happy you had that moment, and are on a path to healing. The gesture of the purse was a lovely way to open the lines of communication.
So true on your paragraph about your own wardrobe and fitness level. So true. I can't believe how far I've dropped since not working.
Excellent writing, wish I had a six for you. Definitely worthy.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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I ask about her two pugs and Jeff in that order. LMAO!
Calorific - love that word
The ending brought me to tears, Shari. I'm so happy you had that moment, and are on a path to healing. The gesture of the purse was a lovely way to open the lines of communication.
So true on your paragraph about your own wardrobe and fitness level. So true. I can't believe how far I've dropped since not working.
Excellent writing, wish I had a six for you. Definitely worthy.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Mary, for a great detailed review. I love it when I bring the reader to tears. Yes, communication for sure. I'm even getting an occasional e-mail. :-) Appreciate the virtual six.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This was simply beautiful! It shows how a simple act of love can heal even the deepest hurts. I have to believe that the "perfect bag" was placed there for one purpose - to help bring you both back together. God always provides us the means but it is up to each of us to take the appropriate action which you certainly did. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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This was simply beautiful! It shows how a simple act of love can heal even the deepest hurts. I have to believe that the "perfect bag" was placed there for one purpose - to help bring you both back together. God always provides us the means but it is up to each of us to take the appropriate action which you certainly did. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Oh, Angel, I love your take on this. I never thought of the red purse having a spiritual. It makes sense. Red symbolizes blood. And as you say, the only one on the rack. Thank you for the six and for opening my eyes.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
That's a happy ending knowing she does care and Jeff is changing. Don't expect anymore happy endings with my family. Well written, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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That's a happy ending knowing she does care and Jeff is changing. Don't expect anymore happy endings with my family. Well written, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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It's too bad your family will carry their anger, resentment, meanness, etc. when they pass over. Carrying grudges won't make the after life easy.
Comment from DALLAS01
The mental and emotional effort you are bent on making wore me out. The sad part, is that I totally understand. The older I get, the need to close any old wounds, real or imagined, and smooth out all of the wrinkles in family relationships, has become more of a priority than ever.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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The mental and emotional effort you are bent on making wore me out. The sad part, is that I totally understand. The older I get, the need to close any old wounds, real or imagined, and smooth out all of the wrinkles in family relationships, has become more of a priority than ever.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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For sure, Dallas. My sister, when she knew she was dying, reconciled with me and also asked my help in letting her get rid of resentment toward Mom. I did. Thanks ever so much for a six.
Comment from Donya Quijote
Good to know there's a few more roses instead of just thorn bushes in your garden. I agree your relationship is on the mend!!! :)
Very much like the contrast between the two conversations between you and your daughter: the phone and the boutique. It shows both sides of your relationship and the direction it is going.
People do grow even the Jeffs of the world and it looks like yours is finally maturing. Perhaps that is the source of your daughter's conversational fatigue, at least when it come to the telephone.
He seems jealous of the relationship you and your daughter have had in the past and are developing once again. I wonder if he realizes that with you and a good relationship with you and Frank could be a surrogate for the lack of a good relationship with his parents. My mom was always jealous of the relationships I established with the mothers and the families of my closest friends. She never understood that we could had the same but she spent her time criticizing me whereas the others let me be me. I never was what or who she wanted me to be. Jeff does seem to be a bit insecure. He could have found that security in a relationship with you and Frank. Just some thoughts...
Hope you had a happy Christmas.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Good to know there's a few more roses instead of just thorn bushes in your garden. I agree your relationship is on the mend!!! :)
Very much like the contrast between the two conversations between you and your daughter: the phone and the boutique. It shows both sides of your relationship and the direction it is going.
People do grow even the Jeffs of the world and it looks like yours is finally maturing. Perhaps that is the source of your daughter's conversational fatigue, at least when it come to the telephone.
He seems jealous of the relationship you and your daughter have had in the past and are developing once again. I wonder if he realizes that with you and a good relationship with you and Frank could be a surrogate for the lack of a good relationship with his parents. My mom was always jealous of the relationships I established with the mothers and the families of my closest friends. She never understood that we could had the same but she spent her time criticizing me whereas the others let me be me. I never was what or who she wanted me to be. Jeff does seem to be a bit insecure. He could have found that security in a relationship with you and Frank. Just some thoughts...
Hope you had a happy Christmas.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Nichole told me that Jeff is insecure a long time ago. I suspect that emotion made her stick by him. She always did go for the underdog. Did you ever come out and tell your mother why you couldn't bond with her?
Hope you have a nice holiday and rest from working. Do you begin a new semester in January with different classes?
