Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Very inventive and interesting write with the very best of rhymes and meter. Like the stark presentation and no picture. Clever in so many ways.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thank you, FB, for the positive review. Bill

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

They found a woman dead in the ditch at SR282 and Creek Road. Wonder if it was Linda. aaab, not bad. Picturesque descriptions. Looks like an excellent post to me.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you, LIJ, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Fridayauthor

Exceptional

Great choice of words and rhymes! This is a super fun poem to read and re-read. I'm sure you took lots of time construction it but it flows so smoothly it is flawless.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you, FA, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Bill,

Except for the fact that you might need to add a flag for the sexual innuendo here, I didn't see a single thing wrong and I saw LOTs of things right. *smile* This was SUCH a fun romp!! Thanks for the smiles and (naughty!) giggles. What a fun piece!

BTW, I just posted a poem that was written ENTIRELY due to a line from one of your poems. THANK YOU!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you, Robyn, for juicing up my poem with a Leprechaun doodad. Sorry if you were offended. I typically wouldn't warn anyone unless I used a bad word, but I see your point. Bill

Comment from closetpoetjester

Exceptional

A delightful romp through the plumbing of the depths of sin and the life and times of a loose lass/knob jockey/jaw breaker by the name of Lasso Linda Leathernotsees

Best one I've read in awhile...just enough lewd to make it bawdy but not so much it was gruesome and balanced with the cutting wit to make an awesome bouncy funny naughty write.

Loved bob the knob...too funny.
Bill, YOU my friend, are a riot. I need to read more of your work...
Just WHERE have you been hiding? Well done! Perfectly written.

Cheers P

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you, P, for giving Linda a look. I usually just slam some 5-7-5's out, but I have about forty character poems in my poetry file. They all have long names of the character as titles. Bill

reply by closetpoetjester on 27-Dec-2016

Well I'll be sure to go for a dig.
I just LOVE engaging poetry, no matter the subject.

With that said, I'm a sucker for a naughty write

Cheers P

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

My characters are under BOOKS in my portfolio and more specifically, PEOPLE

reply by closetpoetjester on 27-Dec-2016

Thanxxx

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Good Lord, Bill. I do NOT want to run into Linda!

I know a lot of people who qualify for stanza number two, but, dang, you wrote it well.

I love it. Blue Ribbon from me, though I'm out of sixes.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thank you, EP, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

She sounds like a handful Bill! lol Nice little ditty about the local scrubber and whore it bounced along nicely like she would

Leathernotsees' daytime job
is moving money for the mob
and once a week to bob a knob
of some old cop named Flynn favourite verse

dip

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

Thank you, DD, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A cute poem about a very realistic character.
The rhymes are great, and add to, rather than take from, the overall movement of the poem.
What a name!! haha,

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

Thank you, Rhonda, for the positive review. Bill

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

This reminds me of something, Bill. Can't get it off my head. A nice comical interplay of words.
Almost a satire of something, though can't put my finger on it.
Excellent read.
Have a great day, Bill.
Best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

I've written forty or so of these character poems, RG. It Jay be close to another sketch. Thanks for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Hahaa. Lol.this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear bill! I thoroughly enjoyed it and it cracked me up.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

Thank you, Rebekka, for the excellent review. Bill