Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

Though the ticking clock was the call for action selflessness rose, because of that attachment to superior thought-coupled with true hearts of four functioning as one complete breathable, single agreeable signature of Almighty chasteness in an empty longing for son's and daughter's of clay made mighty activated flesh-to softly rejoin the flocks of willful obedient invisible worker's/praising the One faithful witness and the Father whom hath known his son, because of that umbilical love shared in the true concern for the created progenies of perfections breathable likeness also knowing love but became lost in selfishness....The wake-up was and still is the Son....Great write my Brother Darren....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, you have literally expanded my vocabulary with the word
Progeny (nies, pl.)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

this is an excellently done haiku and I love the way you said might because it is still up to us if we want to take His offer of sacrifice or not. We will live, but do we want to give up to live?

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Thanks so much. It reminds me of the scriptures, when the apostles asked why the people did not understand his parables, Jesus said,
"Having eyes, they do not see, and having ears, they do not hear"
Thank-you for seeing~ Darren

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I second that heartfelt emotion expressed in haiku, Darren.
Here's hoping that you have a Scary Little Christmas yourself, and a safe, happy, healthy and prosperous New Year.
God bless.
~Dean :}

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

If it is any consolation, I am addicted to reading something of yours every couple of days, it is a new thrill of mine. Thanks for helping me to embrace the darkness, my fancy quilled friend.

Comment from LaRosa

Exceptional

This poem stands on its own.
The picture is beautiful and reminds the reader of the traditional meaning of this holiday time. He was born to die, that we might live!

The truth of the meaning of Christmas. Amen.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, LaRosa. Let us fellowship and love one another, that our joy may be full. I really appreciate your comments, and you help in acknowledge-
ing the REAL reason for this Holiday.
May The Good Lord continue to test and bless you. Love, Darren

reply by LaRosa on 24-Dec-2016

may I say thank you, too...but right now, I think I can do with a rest from the 'testing'.
:) :) :)
May you have a peaceful Christmas, Brother!

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Sorry, I had to balance the equation no offense intended!

reply by LaRosa on 24-Dec-2016

Sorry, Badger, no offense taken. I think I owe YOU an apology considering I phrased this in such a way as to sound negative. I just meant that the poem is so well done. It's beautiful, even without a picture. But the 2 go perfectly together and it was a good choice.

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

You are so compassionate, that makes us even, (human!)

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Thank you~

reply by LaRosa on 24-Dec-2016