Stop, stop
A 2-4-2 poem17 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
Yes, quitting the cigarettes is clever, anytime and anywhere. My father did not quit soon enough. This looks like an excellent entry to the two-four-two contest. Then there was the chap whose coins shorted out his E-cig battery in his pocket--
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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Yes, quitting the cigarettes is clever, anytime and anywhere. My father did not quit soon enough. This looks like an excellent entry to the two-four-two contest. Then there was the chap whose coins shorted out his E-cig battery in his pocket--
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. I am sorry about your father not stopping in time. I know there are downsides to the electric ones.
Comment from TheWriteTeach
A nice 2-4-2 poem. The syllable count is good. I like the message it sends. Don't smoke and be alive. Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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A nice 2-4-2 poem. The syllable count is good. I like the message it sends. Don't smoke and be alive. Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
Comment Written 26-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Best wishes for the New Year.
Comment from c_lucas
With a little bit of discipline bad habits can be brought under control. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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With a little bit of discipline bad habits can be brought under control. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely boxing day.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Robina,
Your poem was short and sweet with only 2-4-2 words.
I'm sure it will go far and you'll get a lot of great reviews for it.
I know I enjoyed reading it and will look forward to more of your work.
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Hi Robina,
Your poem was short and sweet with only 2-4-2 words.
I'm sure it will go far and you'll get a lot of great reviews for it.
I know I enjoyed reading it and will look forward to more of your work.
Kat
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Christmas.
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Thank you very much, Ine. I hope you'll have a very nice Christmas too.
Kat
Comment from royowen
I gave up smoking 33 years ago, also drinking, otherwise I suspect I'd be dead by, (my dad and brother died relatively young, because of it). But a great entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest Ine. Well done, good luck, blessings, and merry Christmas to all, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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I gave up smoking 33 years ago, also drinking, otherwise I suspect I'd be dead by, (my dad and brother died relatively young, because of it). But a great entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest Ine. Well done, good luck, blessings, and merry Christmas to all, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Christmas.
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You too Ine
Comment from krys123
Happy holidays to you and yours, Ine;
-what a wonderful message and a great achievement to be able to stop smoking those fags so you can live a healthy and wonderful life without the smell, the stench and the ugliness of smoking.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one especially in your heart, and your mind and your soul.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Happy holidays to you and yours, Ine;
-what a wonderful message and a great achievement to be able to stop smoking those fags so you can live a healthy and wonderful life without the smell, the stench and the ugliness of smoking.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one especially in your heart, and your mind and your soul.
Alex
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Christmas.
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You are very welcome my dearest friends.
Alex
Comment from AnnaLinda
Robina,
That's a strong message you managed to express
in those 8 syllables. I like your use of "fags" and
how your last line is like a satori.
Well done!
Linda
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Robina,
That's a strong message you managed to express
in those 8 syllables. I like your use of "fags" and
how your last line is like a satori.
Well done!
Linda
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Christmas.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Robina, this is a great 2-4-2 poem about quitting to smoke. I've quit many years ago and I did it from one day to the other, and I was quite a heavy smoker. Well done to both of you. Merry Christmas. Al the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Hi Robina, this is a great 2-4-2 poem about quitting to smoke. I've quit many years ago and I did it from one day to the other, and I was quite a heavy smoker. Well done to both of you. Merry Christmas. Al the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Christmas.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Robina
This is a very good 2-4-2 poem, it has an important message in it. I quit the fags 40 years ago when I was in my 30's and never regretted it.
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Hi Robina
This is a very good 2-4-2 poem, it has an important message in it. I quit the fags 40 years ago when I was in my 30's and never regretted it.
Mary
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Christmas.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Stop Stop, uses the correct syllable count and set up to hail the grand news that you, although still hooked on nicotine, may have a chance to avoid lung cancer. Happy day.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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This 2-4-2, Stop Stop, uses the correct syllable count and set up to hail the grand news that you, although still hooked on nicotine, may have a chance to avoid lung cancer. Happy day.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Christmas.
