sweet sugar shell
a ghazal poem4 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi,
I do believe you have completed all the difficult requirements in this format. I am tempted to try it out myself. Well done. Mary
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Hi,
I do believe you have completed all the difficult requirements in this format. I am tempted to try it out myself. Well done. Mary
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review. It wastricky but this is what I like about this site, trying all poems... at least once. Happy New Year, judester
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Hi Judy, I have managed to write one, I hope it is following all the rules, Mary
Comment from lyenochka
What a fascinating format! I notice that the first "silent" is part of a negative statement so there the bells are full of sound. But thereafter, seems like there is a lot of silence either from sounds held back or held only in memory. Are you far from friends and family while you do amazing sweet confections in the kitchen? I hope you had a blessed Christmas and very Happy New Year to you!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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What a fascinating format! I notice that the first "silent" is part of a negative statement so there the bells are full of sound. But thereafter, seems like there is a lot of silence either from sounds held back or held only in memory. Are you far from friends and family while you do amazing sweet confections in the kitchen? I hope you had a blessed Christmas and very Happy New Year to you!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016
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Snif,my husband wenthome to Canada last week, so it was just me and the dogs cooking up sweet desserts in thekitchen. Actually I had a wonderful Christmas alone.I did a spa, planted some flowers and rosemary, wrote a nice story, no interuptions and a peaceful nap in the afternoon. Thanks for the review and wishing us another year of sharing our stories, cheers, j
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written the form is new to me but I think the way it works adds so much feeling to the poem I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Yes this is well written the form is new to me but I think the way it works adds so much feeling to the poem I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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Thanks for the review. I do like to try different styles. This one was fun but not my favorite. Wishing you a Merry Christmas, cheers, j
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Ghazal poem, not a very easy format but great fun to figure it out. You did a very good ghazal. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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A very well-written Ghazal poem, not a very easy format but great fun to figure it out. You did a very good ghazal. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
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I am home alone with my dogs ths year. Husband and family in Canada.snif . Thanks for the review, cheers, j
