Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Nancy. Long time no hear from. How have you been, my friend? I love seasshells...I just don't have enough of them. While we were in Hawaii last year a got a few, believe it or not.

This is a wonderful thought process in your poem. Have a Happy Holiday with your family. Blessings, Bob

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016

Thank you for reading my work. Merry Christmas!

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Oh wow, Amada,

This is an impressive little piece of poetry!
Loved it! It was like opening up a Christmas
gift. Each line unfolding to the next to
create a really memorable poem and message.

Your last two lines are satori-like. This line
is very humble:

"and an irreversible urge to bow down."

Linda




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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016

Thank you, Sweet Linda. Merry Christams and stars to you!