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Comment from Cranial Thinker
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This again is in the phylum of deep traveling as in third eye envisioning as the structure of your breath's vibration displaying no capitol T in the opening shows in true depth the insignificance of things owning physical properties because a mire spoken word can be manipulated by it....A very great reminder for all who ingest the inner clarity of your profound exhalations that how we exhale truly matters to the lives hearing the swoosh of the wind you exhale....Great write my Brother....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
    I knew that you would realize the significance of this enlightenment. Thanks for reading.
Comment from wondertwin
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What a great concept to grasp. It's interesting to think about because we already know how powerful words can be. Pr 18:21 "The tongue has the power of life and death". Excellent! Blessings, AmyJo

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
    Thanks so much for reading, and sharing a powerful scripture. Godspeed, Darren
Comment from DR DIP
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You write these Haikus very cryptically Badger. You are the thinking man's poet
In the photo ids that an actual ice molecule? I had never known it was like that
then again snow flakes are merely ice molecules anyway I suppose

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thanks, Doc. I always appreciate your candid reviews. Nice 2 B understood . . . Badger
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Yes, it is. I recommend that you search "water emotion" on YouTube, or copy and paste the web address listed.. You WILL be amazed.
Comment from royowen
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There is a proverb in the Old Testament that states " The power of life and death are in the tongue" Proverbs 18:21, so it doesn't surprise me Darren, and excellent haiku my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much I really appreciate your comments. It also says " As a man thinks he, so he is" I just can't seem to find it right now .

reply by royowen on 22-Dec-2016
    Well done Darren
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written haiku. That sounds very inteeresting. To speak to ice and change it into a certain form can be some entertainment.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Yes, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. This seems to be concrete evidence for the power andv intention of the spoken ( or unspoken . . .) word. I appreciate your interest.. Darren
reply by Sandra du Plessis on 22-Dec-2016
    I did check the YouTube video, it is amazing. I am a sstrong believer in the power of our thoughts and words. We can heal or break ourselves and others.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thanks so much I appreciate your interest.