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Collection of haikus

5 total reviews 
Comment from smileycloud
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

yes
I have come here from your message
it is beautiful
it says an enormous amount in few lines
you have made the ocean travel around the entire world/earth (as it does) in just 17 syllables
thank you for sending me here
I love it
I love Haiku because of it's attachment to nature and God's world
and I love Senryu because of it's relationship to human nature in God's image
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
    Thank-you for reading and giving an honest and insightful review. You always add that personal touch of your perspective; I am honored and remain truly yours~

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger < : - D ~
Comment from Cranial Thinker
Excellent
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Ah!!!! now I see you too have finally transcended imperfections insidiousness of making all who listens believe our lives are so limiting when our very souls are in reality the purest form of true thought one could ever imagine or not for we are words of real meaning if we so chose to be and please take special note to the word chose because our walk is in truth flight and our flight is in reality an ever endless journey of ingathering/digesting the glory of life's light in its brilliance of profound inclusive oneness from the Heavens of invisibility to the heavens of seeable luminaries a true oneness of endless shores....Put this to music the world needs to know this badly, great write....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016
    Thanks, my honoured brother. You can truly represent the knowledge of not only reading between the lines, but completely through their multi-dimensional meaning, which a concept which mere words are not even capable of coming CLOSE to describing. This helps ME to get a brief and luminous glimpse of THE infinite reality, I Truly look forward to and treasure , read, and meditate on your feedback.
    Hope your Holidays are filled with reality. Brother Darren
Comment from DR DIP
Excellent
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As an avid surfer i know exactly what you mean The waves never end be them just lapping on the shore or huge wild seas. Good write

merry Christmas

dip

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thanks, Dr., I write these type of posts specifically to elicit your reviews.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent
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wow you went deep with this one. Nicely done as it is true, there is no beginning and end to the oceans and the sea is always in motion, never still

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thank you so so much, I really appreciate your comments. Darren
Comment from Irish Rain
Excellent
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This is just awesome. I suck at the haiku form, but I recognize a good one! If there was an award, this one would take it! Great job, Merry Christmas!!!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thanks, Irish. I look forward to reading your reviews. You have been loyal,; I am honored. Darren