Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I really like this story. Once again you posted a wonderful addition to the novel. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Oh, okay, thanks for the heads up on that. You are quite right!!
Thank you for your comments and support as well.

Merry Christmas to you, too!!

Rhonda

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

wow you put a lot of thought into this interaction. Very well written and very thought provoking. A dangerous situation that sounds like a place gone horribly wrong. No problems noted

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you, Barb!
I appreciate your comments and review. I did actually do more research on this book than the Daredevil Girls, which isn't saying much as the DDG's are pure fantasy, and this one leans more toward science fiction. I also did research on survival from a survival expert, and edible foods of the desert. Thanks for noticing!

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Rhonda, I'm really quite fascinated with the story. I'm wondering how far it will go. Now he's free. And so what?
But that's all leadership is here in Hokee = ... leadership there is in Hokee
I'm looking forward to reading on. Merry Christmas! Ulla xxx

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thank you, Ulla. I appreciate the comments and review. He's not completely free yet, not in the sense that he can leave, but he can do a little spying. haha.

Have a Merry Christmas as well!
Rhonda