Perennials of War
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, Something is definitely going on here, and I'm curious to find out what it is. I'm very intrigued by the whole story.
'Philip went the elevator' = 'Philip went to the elevator'
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Hi Barbara, Something is definitely going on here, and I'm curious to find out what it is. I'm very intrigued by the whole story.
'Philip went the elevator' = 'Philip went to the elevator'
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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DARN!!! I must have read that sentence over 50 times. I would have never of guessed that little word was missing. Thank you for catching it.
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Believe me, I know the feeling. You just can't believe you never saw it. Great story, and I'm looking forward to reading on. :)))
Comment from c_lucas
Only a moron with a strong death wish would try to mug a man holding three German Shepherds on leashes. It's evident that the dogs are well trained. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Only a moron with a strong death wish would try to mug a man holding three German Shepherds on leashes. It's evident that the dogs are well trained. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Oh so true. These dogs are very well trained. Shana will find out how well later. Thank you for the encouraging review
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hmm, there is more to this than meets the eye, Barbara. We know the painting are worth fortunes, but there definitely is something else going on. Does it have to do with Shana herself? I will have to wait and see! Well done, my friend. xsx Sandra
Ps, I got the wrong meaning about the 'dialled' ... Someone else mentioned it, and then I realised you were on about the spelling, lol. Sorry about that. Dialled, with 2 lls is the way it's spelt in the UK. :) xxx
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Hmm, there is more to this than meets the eye, Barbara. We know the painting are worth fortunes, but there definitely is something else going on. Does it have to do with Shana herself? I will have to wait and see! Well done, my friend. xsx Sandra
Ps, I got the wrong meaning about the 'dialled' ... Someone else mentioned it, and then I realised you were on about the spelling, lol. Sorry about that. Dialled, with 2 lls is the way it's spelt in the UK. :) xxx
Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
