Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

You've written a really lovely poem using very few words, which is quite a feat.
I like the image created by the words flame, sparks and embers. The presentation and the picture are also lovely.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate your comments. Darren

Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

Wow!!! For one to become so aware of its intended created mirrored imagery is to learn to inhale the absolute embodiment of the gifted likeness kinetically spoken into realisms shareable livableness where aliveness becomes that enriched embellished selfless character boldly exuding in the mannerism of that born likeness bathing in that true oneness endlessly....Again, simply Wow!!!! What a wonderful day!! So very well expressed, My Brother....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016

You help me see things that I did not realize were there; you have a very insightful and spiritual perspective, and I am truly happy that we met here in this lonely wilderness . . . ..

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

How lovely this was to read as it does in fact warm the soul in feel. your words 'A glow' can be one word or two words without changing the context or meaning at all :)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2016

Thanks, the first word was warmth, but I thought glow sounded better, Thanks for review
Darreb

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

here's another great 3 liner you are getting a great command of 3 line poetry or haiku I have never written a haiku favouring longer 4 line verse but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate your words in haiku

dip

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments. I have gained a new appreciation for this simplicity, it untangles me.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nicely done for the haiku club challenge. Presented beautifully and your count is right on. May you have a wonderful and blessed weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments. Darren

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku for the haiku group about fire. The fire of the soul is not a visible fire, but we can see the spirit of a person in their deeds.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments.