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How could he?

A short story

6 total reviews 
Comment from Rikki66
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I like the writing but want to play devil's advocate. Did the husband challenge the doctor to place the check in her cleavage? If she and her co-workers were so taken aback why did it take years for his actions to come into the light? And if you remember Peyton Place it was the innocents that were done the greatest harm by the gossip and innuendo. Cancer is not deserved by anyone.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
    Thanks,
    Ine
Comment from sunnilicious
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This is quite an interesting story to have KK's picture added to it. Well, bumping into colleagues does have it's advantages.Sexually tinted stories... Hmmpppt. Good visual imagery created. You pushed too far. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Festive season soon.
Comment from tfawcus
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Ha! Testicular cancer - the ultimate punishment for this sleazeball. It sounds as if this particular consultant psychiatrist needed to consult a psychiatrist himself.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Christmas, coming soon.
Comment from CEO2020
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Nice story! Even nicer picture!

"This shrink also told all kind of sexually tinted stories, based on what patients had told him, in the middle of the dining room where all the staff (higher and lower) ate at lunch time. Some people decided to eat at another place."

How long have you been writing?

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Christmas, coming soon. I think five years ago, but as I am Dutch, I will never get top grades.
Comment from RodG
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It is a great shame that professionals like shrinks will tell "stories"about what they hear in confidence. This one appears to have abused his position numerous times, but it is never made clear HOW he finally went too far.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Christmas, coming soon.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I have heard the story of a secretary, who got paid by a Consultant Psychiatrist in her d�©collet�©. ... Darn the luck! It seems those FanStory "Gremlins" have struck here yet again.
I'd correct that in a jiffy if I were you...

This shrink also told all kind of sexually tinted stories, based on what patients had told him, in the middle of the dining room where all the staff (higher and lower) ate at lunch time. Some people decided to eat at another place. ... H-m-m-mmmm...that's understandable. I believe I would have opted to eat some place else too...

Good story about an all too common occurrence these days.
Sexual harassment in the workplace.
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Christmas, coming soon. I can't get this so stay away, so I have to choose an other word.