Dear Tom
Free Verse--Roast Contest68 total reviews
Comment from damommy
As you will remember, I have always called you Michael. It fits you better.
It's just like you to roast yourself.
I can't imagine anyone saying bad things behind your back - just point them out to me - you're always so gracious and kind. And funny. You're the reason I joined Potlatch, as you well know.
I love friendly banter, but I'm always afraid someone may misunderstand me, especially when it's written.
Your roast made me laugh several times. Good fun.
Everyone loves you. Especially old ladies. LOL.
Yvonne
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As you will remember, I have always called you Michael. It fits you better.
It's just like you to roast yourself.
I can't imagine anyone saying bad things behind your back - just point them out to me - you're always so gracious and kind. And funny. You're the reason I joined Potlatch, as you well know.
I love friendly banter, but I'm always afraid someone may misunderstand me, especially when it's written.
Your roast made me laugh several times. Good fun.
Everyone loves you. Especially old ladies. LOL.
Yvonne
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
A clever, creative and fun roast to you, dear Michael.
I enjoyed each line. Your humor with FanStory and yourself made for a great read.
Well done.
Janet
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A clever, creative and fun roast to you, dear Michael.
I enjoyed each line. Your humor with FanStory and yourself made for a great read.
Well done.
Janet
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I have never felt good about calling you Mikey and call you Michael more often than not. Fs is a wonderful site for writers, but you should only believe half of the compliments you receive or you will be disappointed in the real world.If it is criticism cherish it, because usually it is truth. This is really funny; not many people feel comfy roasting them selves. Good work Mike! Nancy
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I have never felt good about calling you Mikey and call you Michael more often than not. Fs is a wonderful site for writers, but you should only believe half of the compliments you receive or you will be disappointed in the real world.If it is criticism cherish it, because usually it is truth. This is really funny; not many people feel comfy roasting them selves. Good work Mike! Nancy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from robyn corum
Michael, (NOT Mikey!)
This was a hoot. I enjoyed the occasional rhyming and I was TERRIFIED of what you were going to say with every line. That makes for an awfully fun poem to read. HAHAHA! Thanks!
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Michael, (NOT Mikey!)
This was a hoot. I enjoyed the occasional rhyming and I was TERRIFIED of what you were going to say with every line. That makes for an awfully fun poem to read. HAHAHA! Thanks!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Dean Kuch
this place has some aspects
quite social in nature
a wonderland crawling with girls
I looked around and thought
look at these hicks
I'm caviar seeking some curls
(you see, I can write, yep, I'm slick) ... You mean to tell me there are babes crawlin' around here at good ol' FanStory, Mike?
Jesus.
I must be writing in the wrong fricking genre...
Nice roast.
Best of luck...
~Dean
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this place has some aspects
quite social in nature
a wonderland crawling with girls
I looked around and thought
look at these hicks
I'm caviar seeking some curls
(you see, I can write, yep, I'm slick) ... You mean to tell me there are babes crawlin' around here at good ol' FanStory, Mike?
Jesus.
I must be writing in the wrong fricking genre...
Nice roast.
Best of luck...
~Dean
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Well, Michael, this is quite a rant only to find out you are roasting yourself. LOL
Now as to the girls,,,we talk,,,yes we do,,,and you are still the best of all on here. This piece goes to prove it, dear friend. Very well done
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Well, Michael, this is quite a rant only to find out you are roasting yourself. LOL
Now as to the girls,,,we talk,,,yes we do,,,and you are still the best of all on here. This piece goes to prove it, dear friend. Very well done
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from nomi338
You sir, are hilarious. I don't think I have had the pleasure of reading your work before, but I now plan to read much more. I am literally in stitches from laughing at your humorous musings, call outs and funny put downs.
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You sir, are hilarious. I don't think I have had the pleasure of reading your work before, but I now plan to read much more. I am literally in stitches from laughing at your humorous musings, call outs and funny put downs.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Excellent poem. I guess Gypsy finds out paybacks a bitch. Some told Taylor Swift not to write a song about John Mayer when they broke up. He said, "He can write songs too."
I guess Gypsy finds out you can write too.
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Excellent poem. I guess Gypsy finds out paybacks a bitch. Some told Taylor Swift not to write a song about John Mayer when they broke up. He said, "He can write songs too."
I guess Gypsy finds out you can write too.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from frierajac
It is indicative of a riled brain that you must confuse ones own desires with resentful fantasy that others, is it then ? just fun and games. However, you happen to one of those who are quite entertaining to observe in the throes of your own untoward passions. although.....
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It is indicative of a riled brain that you must confuse ones own desires with resentful fantasy that others, is it then ? just fun and games. However, you happen to one of those who are quite entertaining to observe in the throes of your own untoward passions. although.....
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, this is really good. So you don't like Mikey? I will call you Michael from now on. You are so spot on with this, and your probably right we would roasted in the real world for our writing. Nevertheless, still a good site to learn the craft. A really strong entry. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hahahahaha, this is really good. So you don't like Mikey? I will call you Michael from now on. You are so spot on with this, and your probably right we would roasted in the real world for our writing. Nevertheless, still a good site to learn the craft. A really strong entry. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
