Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A sweet poem and a sweet picture of this little harbinger of spring. Nice presentation. Best of luck in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

I have read all the entries for the "Poem of Spring" contest and, in my opinion, all of them, including yours, have great form, fit and function. The variety of styles is wonderful to see. It was very difficult to vote for me. I really love the contests when I have that problem. Congratulations on a wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

And thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

Cute little thing such robin can bring so much joy to the time of Spring. A short springy poem reminds us how much we miss that season. Well done and good luck on your entry. Blessings, Ella

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2016

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Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

At least you were allowed to use the word 'spring'!

Your choice of the septolet form was a wise one, condensing all the emotion evoked by the return of spring down to a few words. The robon is an apt symbol for the season and the overture metaphor also works well here.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for reading zanya