Comment from royowen

Excellent

It turns out that Shana is seeking some art treasure owned by her great, great grandfather Haim, he left them behind with his brother Tomas when He fled Germany, leaving the artwork with him, unfortunately he was arrested by the Nazis in 1938, and died in Dachau but some treasures are missing, great storytelling Barbara, similar the story of "woman in gold" a quest by a Jewish lady to regain that piece of artwork, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2016

Yes. I have read that lady's story. I think she was 93 years old when she retrieved her artwork. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, well we are learning more about the background of the story. That is good and well presented.

Good job.

notes:


Shana inhaled a deep breath and {her both} hands came to her mouth.

- suggest switching these words around

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2016

LOL Thank you for catching that. I changed that sentence as I posted and still got it wrong. I appreciate the help.

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Nice continuation of this story.
There is indeed mystery behind Shana.
You leave me with questions and she has only started her story.
Very nice characters.
Waiting for more.
Michael

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2016

Thank you for the kind review.