Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2016

Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........Portia

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This seems like it is getting ready to sprout wings and find a melody. It has completed the requirement for the contest and is also like the spontaneous blessing from a grandparent.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016

Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.............