meddling teenagers
a scooby doo haiku...boo!2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good entry for the contest.
-Format is good.
-Connection is good between lines one and two.
-You set the scene very well,
and also describe the characters well.
-Good satori because it shows
some of what these characters are known for.
-Good luck in the Scooby Doo Haiku contest!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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-A good entry for the contest.
-Format is good.
-Connection is good between lines one and two.
-You set the scene very well,
and also describe the characters well.
-Good satori because it shows
some of what these characters are known for.
-Good luck in the Scooby Doo Haiku contest!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Jinkies! Thanks for the review, wish I had a few more syllables. Kids, check...Scooby, check ... guest ghoul, check, and the kids are entertained every saturday.. Cheers, j
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You are quite welcome, Scooby Haiku fan writer! You could always write a sonnet!
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Ode to scooby doo, hmmm. Cheers, j
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There you go, great idea🙂
Comment from mbroyles2
This covers the competition rules well.
Brought back good memories with highlights of key elements. Meddling kids and Scooby snacks.
Great job!
Michael
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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This covers the competition rules well.
Brought back good memories with highlights of key elements. Meddling kids and Scooby snacks.
Great job!
Michael
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Jinkies! Thanks for the review.Yeah, that's the basic formula ....add the guest ghoul each week, and the kids are entertained. Cheers, judester
